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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...For a first NC-17 that was totally amazing! *bows down to yourpure brilliance* Luv it! ^^ Make a sequel soon! ^^
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wohis his was just your first? It was done very nicely, very tastefully; some people get a bit carried away with NC17 and start sounding crass. Thankfully I've never had that problem...and neither do you :D I'm very intrigued now. The ending confused the hell out of me (but that isn't hard XD) and I'm definitely looking forward to how this progresses.
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February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please say your making a sequal! this was sooooooo good what happions when Jack gets there will dreams come true? and I wanna say I love this again I really do! you are soooo awsome
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good start. I hope there is more coming?
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!! *jumps up and down*
You must update this chapter now. So stop reading my review and type!!! TYPE QUICKLY!!!
You must update this chapter now. So stop reading my review and type!!! TYPE QUICKLY!!!
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I normally don't review, but GOD!
You made me a happy (not so little) little girl about to head off to bed...and I love you for it!
*sorry if my review skills are lacking, but as I said, I don't normally review anyway*
You made me a happy (not so little) little girl about to head off to bed...and I love you for it!
*sorry if my review skills are lacking, but as I said, I don't normally review anyway*
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that there will be a sequel, in which Jacl and Will get to discuss their shared dream. Very nicely done.
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
2 thumbs up. i would like to see the next chapter. do post again soon plez.
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoW!!! I would like to have a dream like that with one of them *or both hehehe* in it. So is there more are they going to have more dreams or when Jack gets to Port Royal will the talk about the dream or just try to make the dream come true? Great story!!
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is your first? I can't wait to see your next one then, this was very good. Thanks for fixing my Monday on a good note.