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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story,This should be a Movie,But this story just doesn't seem completed :[
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love an update :)
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I want to find out what happens next!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to agree w/ Bre-soI'll just say it has a lot of room for improvement. But it was my understanding that Molly's parents did not know, or they would have stopped her from visiting Jason. I'll rate it as average-maybe next chapter will be a 4. You have a lot of pontential there as a horror/romance genre
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good ,but how dose that qualify for oral.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Had to review because... omg. Jason is cute. There aren't too many F13 fanfictions, so when I finally find one worth reading, I have to review.
Keep writing. ^_~
The only complaint I have is that Jason seems a little too intelligent. That won't stop me from reading more, though. :D
Keep writing. ^_~
The only complaint I have is that Jason seems a little too intelligent. That won't stop me from reading more, though. :D
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, cuz i don't wan't to flame but you fic was absolutely idiotic.
this isn't what you call "undoing damage".
please don't write anymore.
i'm not trying to offend you but this type of fic should be on ff.net not aff.net
this isn't what you call "undoing damage".
please don't write anymore.
i'm not trying to offend you but this type of fic should be on ff.net not aff.net
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's was f*$#(^% awesome!!!!!!
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How can you possibly call Jason X crap after writing this awful piece of garbage?
First of all, your character is DEFINITELY a Mary-Sue. Look up the definition and start from scratch.
Jason's way out of character. Maybe he'd save her, maybe not. But he wouldn't 'fall in love' and become obsessed by her.
and for a final point.
say say that Molly's dad is coming to pick them up and that she visits Jason frequently.
What sane parent would knowingly allow their child to continue to make contat with a mass murderer, no matter if he'd saved her life or not?
First of all, your character is DEFINITELY a Mary-Sue. Look up the definition and start from scratch.
Jason's way out of character. Maybe he'd save her, maybe not. But he wouldn't 'fall in love' and become obsessed by her.
and for a final point.
say say that Molly's dad is coming to pick them up and that she visits Jason frequently.
What sane parent would knowingly allow their child to continue to make contat with a mass murderer, no matter if he'd saved her life or not?
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Moooore!~