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for Crystal lake Remake (The prequel)

by flamekaat

person Goatboy Damient
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful. I need more of this. I've been waiting for someone to do this. I have this feeling that Jason may be the big evil, and the biggest badass ever, but I also think he's human and has some morals.
Jason isl!Bul!But not all evil!Like myself!
So more!YAY!
- Goa
person Vixey
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, keep up the good work. No one's updating the good stories anymore. :( I did like Jason X though. the plot was kinda dumb, i'll admit but it did have some funny parts in it. anyway, please please update!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!
person Talea Frost
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your plot seems understandable, which is always a good sign in fan fiction.

The only problems that occur to me are that Molly strikes me as a Mary-Sue. Typically beautiful and talented but also a damsel in distress. I admit, I twitched on more than one occasion whilst reading your fic.
You're right. Jason is out of character. Try as I might I just can't believe that he would fall in love with a girl he saves. But, I do like the way he seems to turn dark at the end. Keep him dark if you, as, as opposed to sweet and gentle.
Bring on the het. ^_^

I'm smutty for sex scenes, and although Bite's 'Murderous Saviour' has the same plot-ish, she can right a good sex scene.



-and I'm spent.
person yodana
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a beautiful story! I love it! *eagerly awaits the next chapter*
person foxyboy
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved the story keep it up~!