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This is indeed just a scene from the movie, but, to the author's credit, it does seem to be retelling the scene from Troi's point of view, and expressing her emotions and thoughts.

Um.....Wasn't this the actual script???

How can this fic be updated? It's a scene from the movie. Update with what, another scene from the movie? There is no update to this fic. It isn't even a fic! It's a scene from the movie that's been written down and posted on this website. People, watch the movie. This scene doesn't lead to anything NC-17 rated. It leads to Troi telling Picard about it in sickbay and requsting that she be relieved. She winds up getting gets refused. Picard's abduction immediatley to follow.

Great story. Can't wait to read more. Update PLEASEEEEEEEEEE. ;P
DF

Please just stop writing. You are not a good writer, in even the vagusenssense...

This has too many grammar erros and mispellings to even list.

Burn your keyboard.

this is just a write-up of the two scenes in the movie, the one with her in bed and the deleted scene.

This is very well written. You deal with a difficult subject in a very adult way, and don't just use the 'rape' scene as titillation. Well done.

Oh thank god! There are too little Troi stories out here (as in on the net ;-)) or let me rephrase, too little new stories.
I'll read this one as soon as I get some time alone, but please continue writing! And maybe upgrade to NC-17?