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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Verrrry nice.
Besides, what does that last line mean? I never really understood John Lennon.
Please write more!
SK
Besides, what does that last line mean? I never really understood John Lennon.
Please write more!
SK
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw, damn now you made me go and wet my comp seat o.o ..not that that wasn't the overall effect of the movie to begin with.. but thats beside th point.... I admire your grand porn-writing skills, may they continue to grow like so many other things...
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First off, I would like to say *yum.* You're writing is... electric. So much of what you get these days in fanfiction sounds like the same thing over and over, the same words cycling around, in different combinations by different authors, but essentially the same. Yours was different. This, and it's prequel, have a creativity and originality that I find highly comendable. Kudos! ^_^
On the other hand, I would like to suggest that you either proofread your fanfiction a little better, or find a beta reader. It wasn't much, but there was just enough to distract, and in such great writing, the typos seemed more out of place than usual. Anyway. Thanks!
Mmm, Curt and Brian...
On the other hand, I would like to suggest that you either proofread your fanfiction a little better, or find a beta reader. It wasn't much, but there was just enough to distract, and in such great writing, the typos seemed more out of place than usual. Anyway. Thanks!
Mmm, Curt and Brian...
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay... horny now