rate_review Reviews

Wow! This was hot and emotional at the same time. Love how much Luke cares for Leia. He would do anything for her. Obviously that is because he is her twin brother and feels a special connection to her. That is why I love reading stories about their pairing. A girl's first time needs to be special and Luke is the perfect guy for Leia to loose her virginity to. And I like that Leia was in command during their mating. She has a more dominating personality than Luke hence it's natural for her to be more aggressive in terms of sexual relations as well.

This is horrible. Almost every thout out of Leia's mouth is a command. 'Fuck me now!' 'Luke, my tits!' 'Take off my clothes!' 'Take off your clothes!' I know Leia is a strong woman but give me a break. And she's pretty darn adventurous for a virgin, at least you seeim to be implying she's one. There are numerous typos and spelling errors too. And I'm not even going to go into the bad characterizations except to say, sure your characters are named Luke and Leia but that's about all they have in common with the Luke and Leia of Star Wars. I have nothing against unknowing incest in a fan fiut Iut I do have a problem with bad writing and this is a bad fan fic. And lastly, your title? You're awfully close to Bakura from The Truce of Bakura, anovenovel that takes place right after Return of the Jedi.

Oh that's DISGUSTING!!! I mean, it's Star Wars, not V. C. Andrews!

Oh my graciousness! I adored every word of this fic! I especially loved Sakura's comments at the end. It was like she had realized that even if they weren't all touching at the same time, they were all touching each other anyway. It was this fabulous moment of connectedness. I just loved how hot and just intimate everything seemed. It was about them finding their own place in each other's lives while, at the same time, finding out a little more about themselves. Simply superb. I hope you write more for the Naruto fandom in the very near future. I know I'll be sure to read it. *sends huggles and peach rings to fabulous author!*