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for Forever isn't that long...

by Shinon

person mlle
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I ejoyed the way it was written but had to give up due to the format, which made it very difficult to read. A couple of tabs and spaces would be a huge help in making the story more readable and clear, as well as help with the pacing. Apart from that I liked what I read so far.
person Miko Kayla
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story please post more chapters soon!
person Aquis-S
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOh! awesome story so far! hope you update soon!
person Inge
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story can´t wait for more, but real life must take priority...I gesh
person kat
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it. please write more. i'm begging you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Persia
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So he's gonna be evil huh? Good, nothing I love better than a mean, sexy bastard. Absolutely delicious...
person sita
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yahhh!!! Another Labyrinth fic!