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Loved it! So funny and hot at the same time! (fyi, if you want to read any of my stories they're under the pen lonewolf)

Only read this version and I loved it. Did you ever read the mermaid stories from (I think) L. Frank Baum? Read his stories avidly as a child.

This story is one of my favorits, and there never was anything wrong with it.

I'm not quite sure why, but this story was rather disturbing to me... :::shrug:::

I really like this story and to see if Jack left the island.

Just enough plot. That was devilish ingenious of you, not only figuring how a mermaid might take in a man, but using the special equipment to enhance the experience.:)

I'd like it fine, if you brought back Jade to demonstrate what she wants with that bit of magic. Or just to see more Atlanteans walking their fish.

Marvelous! I loved all the little details, like the jellyfish-lights, the merman walking a fish and especially the fever-cure and disposal of the disease.
Please do a sequel!
A cute little merchild that visits his or her father to get some experience in shape-changing (into two-leg form) and living on dry land?
I'd also love to see Norrington in the same situation. I imagine him pouting on an giant sponge while the household's pet, an octopus, tries to seduce his wig.

LOVED it!!!!!!!!! I should sooooooo read more of your stories! You're soo good! Please do me a huge favor and review my story? I would appreciate the imput. It's called La Belle Rosa and my pen-name is HisBeautiful. Please please please read it! I would love you for that! Anywho good story I always how'd mermaids had sex. Now I know.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

I loved this story! Too bad it was one shot. I have a story that's desperately in need of reviews. It's called Silver And Gold, and it's under Deparrparrow, because I cannot remember my user nand pnd password. It would be very kind of you to read and review it.
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~Chica from San Diablo~

A fish tale? oh please, Im laughing. Stop. I can't stand it. And the sex scene [yes i am an authority] was not awkward. I thought it fascinating because I always wondered about this, I mean, fish do have a sexual opening after all, and merfolk are more like two-legs (loved it) than fish fish. And the tongue. I could just go on about the tongue. forever. What a hoot. Snakes it back to his tonsils and he emmediately starts ffanticising about things she could do with that tongue. very funny funny funny. Can't see what would be awkward about it, though I did wonder what position she was in when her tail was under his head. Do merfolk give live birth like manatees? or do they lay egg pods like sharks?
Jack always could recognize an opportune moment when he saw one. and a merman walking a fish? gee, Id at least want something exotic as a pet, like and octopus---ocean equivalent of a ferret.