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for In the Dark

by RavenWolf

person SaraNersen
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mr. Pants needs to go somewhere and die. I liked the story and I think you should write more. Me? I never really pay attention to my reviewers
person olena
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well...it was great up to the 'most interesting' spot! Why didn't you write it just as detailed as you did the rest? I find your style very good and all, although I couldl itl it wasn't edited. None the less, I think this fic suffered a loss by not having a juicy sex scene Hehehee, just me and my perverted mind talking. And, for what it's worth, you should keep writing. Don't get discouraged by stupid little people.
person Mr. Pants
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeew! That's disgusting! Morpheus is big, fat and bald and plus, he's a fucking freak. No! It's just wrong! It's all nasty and it's not going to happen because he's just a dip-shit who means nothing to anybody! Gross! Yuckie! Please don't write anything like this ever again. On that note, just to be safe, please don't write ANYTHING ever again.

Best of wishes from the ruler who reigns surpreme over your pathetic soul.

-Pants