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July 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM
This story moved me to tears! It was amazing. I hope there's a sequel soon!
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March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so sad!
possibility of a sequel?
possibility of a sequel?
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September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope that isn't all that you plan for these two! It was a simply marvelous story and I adore how you worked both the characters of Ardeth and Jonathan. Ardeth loves Jonathan so much, enough that he let Jonathan go and return to England. Very sad ending for this story, but also extremely fitting. Jonathan definitely needs time in order to come to terms with everything that has happened, but it was still depressing that he sailed off without Ardeth... It was an excellent ending though, and I do hope you're planning a sequel where these two get together!
Anyway, fabulous job on this story and I hope you keep up the amazing work!
Anyway, fabulous job on this story and I hope you keep up the amazing work!
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I truly love this story, and I have only one word to describe my current thoughts on it. Sequel. keep up the awesome work.
-FM
-FM
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please add the next chapter, please!!!
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read your gorgeous story... Its a waste you abandoned this wonderful story :(
It actually became one of my favourites and I´m sad I won´t be able to read more of it...
Even thou the rape scene was very hard, it was really good written, displaying all feelings and the horror of bearing such thing.
You managed to show the different charakters and played the feelings of the reader really good...
I enjoyed reading a lot and already miss the further development of the story...
I´m still grateful to have been able to read this, so thank you very much:)
If you ever got time and would like to continue please do so and tell me^.^
PS: Sorry for my mistake, I´m no native spreaker and haven´t been writing in english for quite a while now^^°
It actually became one of my favourites and I´m sad I won´t be able to read more of it...
Even thou the rape scene was very hard, it was really good written, displaying all feelings and the horror of bearing such thing.
You managed to show the different charakters and played the feelings of the reader really good...
I enjoyed reading a lot and already miss the further development of the story...
I´m still grateful to have been able to read this, so thank you very much:)
If you ever got time and would like to continue please do so and tell me^.^
PS: Sorry for my mistake, I´m no native spreaker and haven´t been writing in english for quite a while now^^°
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh so exciting! Finally something to catch that bastard X3 Please update soon!! X3 XD
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I feel kinda guilty for liking this, but I still do. I love it and I hope you update soon :D
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No! no, no, no, no, no!
You canNOT stop here!
I need to know how this ends!
Poor, poor Jonathan.. I feel sick to my stomach right now.
Evil, disgusting son of a bitch..
PLEASE, return.. please..
You canNOT stop here!
I need to know how this ends!
Poor, poor Jonathan.. I feel sick to my stomach right now.
Evil, disgusting son of a bitch..
PLEASE, return.. please..
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG.
This story held me spellbound. When Jon was attacked I kept going where the heck is Ardeth?? End this torture now!
Seriously I was on the edge of my seat going I don't want to read anymore but I have to know if it gets better. Beautiful writing, and the characters are actually quite realistic. Loved it.
Though I had to smile at your interpretation of why Ardeth seemed to try to run over Jon in the movie. Update soon!
I'll be waiting~
This story held me spellbound. When Jon was attacked I kept going where the heck is Ardeth?? End this torture now!
Seriously I was on the edge of my seat going I don't want to read anymore but I have to know if it gets better. Beautiful writing, and the characters are actually quite realistic. Loved it.
Though I had to smile at your interpretation of why Ardeth seemed to try to run over Jon in the movie. Update soon!
I'll be waiting~