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Oh please please please update... I didn't look at when this last was but please. Its awesome

I love the story. Ardeth and Jonathan pairings are my fav. I hope you pick the fic back up. I can't wait to see what happens to that scum!! Please update soon!

I knew that I recognized your writing! It has been a while, since tSFA, to be exact!

Wow. This is my favorite pairing from this series, and, this is a kick-ass story. I had to read all sixteen chapters at once. I could not stop. Unable to point out specific things, I will just say that I enjoy the entire thing. Setting, theme, mood, everything! I eagerly await the next chapter!

- Kalysia (formerly Ronnie's Fan)

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! Ive been waiting since your last update and its been killing me not knowing what happens next. this is the only story of its kind(at least the only one iv found that was not crap)PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPATE DON'T ABONDOND SUCH A GOOD STORY or if you are gonna abondon this then put it up for adoption and let someone finish it for you...and everyone eles whos waiting!!!!!

Oh my! I love this story! Poor Jonathon.... but good thing he has people to take care of him! I really can't wait to read more - I hope you will update soon! And I hope that holden gets what is coming to him!

Love it!!never thought about ardeth/rick before fucking cute pairing though! keep updating please!

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WOW!!! ILOVETHIS STORY!!! WILL YOU PLEASE CONTINUE THIS AND UPDATE!!!

ACK!!!

Update, please!!!

WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! Please... I love this fic... I need to see some vengeance bloodshed... *starts daydreaming*

I've been waiting for this story to update like forever! I mean there are not many Johnathen slash fanfics out there even less really good ones like the one you have written, every few weeks when i can i look to see if you have updated only to think u might have dropped it. T_T(sob)PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
thank u i will cheack later, l love your story!!!
THE BLACKWOLF