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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
While I really like the way this is progressing, you are in serious need of a beta, because there are loads of grammatical errors. Maybe you should look into that.
However, I'm looking forward to reading the rest. There's not enough Mummy slash out there.
However, I'm looking forward to reading the rest. There's not enough Mummy slash out there.
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow so dark.And written so well. 5 stars please add more!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
noo!! finish soon, what happens to jonathan??!!!
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good writting. Poor Jonathon. He's due for some respite, don'tcha think?