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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahem...well...
You are an excellent writer. Expansive vocabulary you have there. Though I'm pretty certain that that type of sexual act is physically impossible...they don't call it fiction for nothing. Good job!
You are an excellent writer. Expansive vocabulary you have there. Though I'm pretty certain that that type of sexual act is physically impossible...they don't call it fiction for nothing. Good job!
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is incredibly hot, you have to write more, please!
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my. Thatwas hot. And the end was wow....oh my. Well done! The last line killed me. "ANd no More"- three words justified that entire story. Dont get me wrong, a good pwp is all you need sometimes but that has got to me. :)
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! how can one part be complete? i mean, if will's gonna be between jack and norrington, you shouldn't deny him...haha, i just laugh thinking about disney being terrified about this interpretation of the line...ahhh, nothing like torturing people with money... anyways, first paf maf many? i dunno, suggestions just keep coming from me
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is excellent. Write more!
Sorry i cant write a more informative or better spelled reveiw but i am very sick at the moment (flu).
But this is great!
Sorry i cant write a more informative or better spelled reveiw but i am very sick at the moment (flu).
But this is great!
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sarryn!
You are back, with another well-written, intricate and erotically beautiful story!! Your imagination is beyond anything I have ever read or could possibly issue on the screen. Just absolutely stunning work! You write everything so eloquently, it makes me feel so barbaric with my feeble attempt.
Please, please write more and post very soon! You have my rapt attention!!
Newenit
You are back, with another well-written, intricate and erotically beautiful story!! Your imagination is beyond anything I have ever read or could possibly issue on the screen. Just absolutely stunning work! You write everything so eloquently, it makes me feel so barbaric with my feeble attempt.
Please, please write more and post very soon! You have my rapt attention!!
Newenit
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My god...you have beautiful writing. It's as if I can feel your descriptions. Very powerful. Can't wait till next chapter. Good luck!
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