rate_review Reviews

God.. that was as beautiful and twisted as the movie. Perhaps even more so.

^_^ amazing!

That was deliciously good, my dear writer. XD

I loved the way you protrayed both Jack and Tyler. It was fantastic.

That was freakishly good, I have to say. I considered the writing style to be intense that draws the reader in, that and there's some love-makin' in the scene. :p

Anyways, it was wonderfully done and you should probably consider making more fanfics for this couple later on when you're willing to.

I like it. There are a few spelling and gramatical errors, but it's really well written. I love "Jack"/Tyler stories, even though it makes me giggle to think what "Jack" would look like doing this if someone walked in on him... Anyway, bravo.

Woah, that was done brilliantly, you've got a lot of talent. I think you did a great job, the setting/actions of the characters seemed very realistic. I liked the last bit though, touching . . . not sweet but roughly so. If that makes sense? Because I mean it's not like Tyler and Jack can have a fluffy relationship but the way you protrayed them made it so that it doesn't appear twisted. Anyways this was wonderful, I just saw the movie a few weeks ago and was like holy shit, there has to be slash for this somewhere. But I really enjoyed reading your story, you have an intense style of writing. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your works in the near future! *grins* *waves*

Icy

Wow....that's all I can think of to say. Very IC

Ooh, how nice! Liked this much, I did.

Ooh! I love it. Arousing, nicely written... So proud.

wow...(fans self with paper)