rate_review Reviews

Very good story. A few things: you will want to put it through spellcheck, as many words were misspelled, omitted, jumbled up with other words, and there was double punctuation. Much of the dialogue seemed rushed, as if they were just standing there talking at each other. I would reccomend putting some blocking inbetween some lines of dialogue. Lastly, the final chapter was a bit confusing, as I wasn't sure what it meant. Was it a dream, was everything that happened an illusion, or what?
It was a very good story, just needs some final polishing to make it better.

Amazing. I love the story line and plot. Your characters are on target, although Jareth seems kinder than in the movie he's not outragously so. I love Your Characters of Colvin and Valerian. Usualy authors acharacters dont work verry well in stories but i think they helped make the story. exspecialy Colvin she is perfect for the story and gives it a resl freshness. on a side not Valerian is a root that is what is used in Valium taken alone it relaxes the body and help to sleep easily. Ofcourse if i had him in my bed i would definitly sleep easy so i gues it works. The only critism i have is a few gramatical errors wich could be easily fixed. I think this story needs a sequal. Great job

Defentily going on my favorites . . . *Sigh* I hope my fairy tale comes true.

I loved this story!

SEQUEL!!!!!!! I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!!

An absolutely wonderful piece. And I really liked the twist in the end.
Thanks you for sharing this.

WOW!!!!! I HAVE ALWAY DREAMT OF A SEQUAL TO LABRYINTH! YOUR STORY WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. I LOVE SARAH AND JARETH. WOW! IF ONLY WE COULD GET THIS STORY INTO A MOVIE. THEN DAVID COULD WAEAR THOSE AMAZINGLY REVEALING PANTS AGAIN, ALL WILL BE GOOD!!!! ANYWAYS, I HIGHLY RECOMMEND THIS FIC. AHHHHH LOVE, ITS SO GREAT! I WANT TO GO TO THE UNDERGROUND. WELL, LABRYINTH: A FORGOTTEN LOVE IS GREAT! BYE!!!!!! :)

well i maust say apart from the slightly confusing yet utterly romantic last chapter, this is an awesome story and i loved it! i even liked the alst chapter even if it was confuzling. lol. you are a great author and should definitely keep it up.

Forgotten Love is one of the best Jareth/Sarah fics I have ever read! A very beautiful, romantic story that I highly recommend to all my friends and everyone else who is a Labyrinth or Jareth/Sarah fan.

Well it took a couple long hours into the 6 am hour to read it all but that was the best sarah and jareth story i think i have ever read. Some parts were a bit face paced, but over all it was an excelent read, which more then likely i will read again. ^_^ I hope you could continue w/ val and colvins story that would be so entertaining. ^_~