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for Darkness Rising

by SaMe

person Wooze
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that is mean, you know, stopping right there. I wanna know how he ended up working for the CIA, just like you promised! =p I hope you'll continue this one, one day...
person SS
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nothing phases SJ eh? it was a LONG time between chapters Merrie, and I got the impression you were working up to something I really wanted to read, guess I'll have to wait til next time round. I missed Jeffrey, bring him back pronto! Thanks for the update.
person SS
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOOD chapter Merrie, I knew you couldn't let him die. I loved your play on words in the opening paragraphs, they were magic to read. These updates are taking far too long however, but I'll sacrifice quantity for this kind of quality anyday. Thanks as always.
person SS
schedule October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good golly FF, what a place to end it, I hate when you end them like that, it just makes me want to read MORE, as usual, do you get taught how to do that? Or does it just come natural? You can keep Jeffrey doped up to the eyeballs forever as far as I'm concerned, he's so cute that way. I love what you make come out of his mouth, its just so unpsycotic, like a 6ft muddled teddy bear.
So are you going to kill off Roland, he really needs to be whacked, such a jerk-off. Do I have to wait another month or will Sands die in the corridorblooblood loss waiting for you to update? I guess I really limed it FF, can you tell?
person SS
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 1 ? A little long ? It was way too short, as always Merrie, I agree with Psnoo they need to be longer. Why does it always seem like I've read the story really quickly and there is never enough? Oprah was a nice touch and Jeffrey is awful cute when he's drugged to the eyeballs. (I guess thats not what you want to hear. Right?) So how long do you think Part 2 will take to get up? Not that I'm whingeing or anything, just want to know is all. Thanks bunches for the timely update.
person SS
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was wow, Merrie. The PHONE, you are brilliant, I loved it, short but perfect. More? Sooner than at all possible? please? Nagging will continue without end if its longer than a week. (:-Þ)
person SS
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A week, yeah right, pull the other one it plays jingle bells !! I'll believe it when I see it. Less than a week would be kind of excellent though. I really limed it Merrie, thanks.
person SS
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well it was worth the wait, I just forgot to check to see if it had been updated, as always your stories are far too short, I need them tripled at least, I do so hope that this is updated soon, thanks.
person SS
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've really really missed these maniacs, that was great Merrie and yes I'll ask...whs Pas Part II coming?
person PPL/SS
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
New chapter at long last, I was like dying here from a lack of SJ wackiness. It seemed a lot lighter than the previous 12 chapters?? I don't know, maybe its because I read them ages and ages ago. I really really limed it. Thanks Merrie....oh and apology accepted :-Þ