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for More Than Darkness

by SaMe

person SS
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I looked at the reviews to see where I was up to, Chapter 81 was the last entry I made, so I re-read it and
its all coming back to me now. But I seem to remember something about Aida being in England and Sands finding her. I'll continue on from 81 and see where I did get up to.
So glad the site is operational again, I have so missed this fic and the way you two write. Thanks for the headsup.
person Mary Ellen
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. It kept me riveted for hours at a time. Eventually, I had to tear myself away to sleep.
It is over? I hope not but if it does continue and Jeffrey reappears I hope they get back to tolerating each other.
It was more enjoyable then. A little more spanking would be nice.
person SS
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
81.
So much happened in that chapter, is Sands going to reappear? Must go read more.
person SS
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
80.
All Sands and Aida, that was really different, but good, as always.
I don't know whats happened to some reviews, they just disappeared.
person SS
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
75.
Pre-natal eavesdroppers? Rotfl!! I love the sound of naked Shakespeare. I just love competitive fic writers ;)
Also the addition of angels was perfect.
person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 83

Oh man this just keeps getting better and better-as always. ;-) Ian's a little darling isn't he? 0:-) And man...poor Sands. Heh. He's getting quite a taste of what he did to Jeffrey... *evil laughter*
person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 82

Awww!!! I just have to say that that was the saddest chapter I think I've read of this. I'm actually rather proud of Aida for making it on her own though. I think she needed it as much to get away from Sands, as to heal herself.

More please? 0:-)
person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 81

Gah! Aidaaaaa! Tsk. Bad Aida. *slaps Aida's wrist* Where'd that little spitfire run off to? :-p Wow... I can't believe they were actually caught... And hooray on smart Jeffrey kids! :-D We of course knew they'd be...special. ;-) Wonder where they're off to now.

Uuuungh. More pleeeease? You've got over 20 more chapters already written. You need to let us reeeead them! C'mon! Don'tcha love the reviews? 0:-)
person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 79

Yaaaay! Babies!!! Heh... Nice chappie. Loved Salida's attitude goin' into labour. :-p Nice bit of action there getting Aida out of prison too. ;-)
person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 78

Sheesh! I finally get ALMOST caught up and you have to go an update again! >:( Heh. I'm enjoying this as usual though. Poor poor Aida. Sands is gone for 2 months...sheesh. I can't even begin to imagine a S.W.A.T. team coming in during MY family's Christmas Eve. That's when we do all the celebrating and shtuff. Man oh man! Caribbean! Hell yes! Mmm... Never been but seems loverly. Can't wait to see the big dance number!