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for More Than Darkness

by SaMe

person Cold-Blooded Angel
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far.
I love that you protrayed Sands as a lunatic.
Hope you review soon.
person BlueTrinity
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, My, God.

This is fantaslical (I had to make up a word for it)

Please don't stop, and I mean that, compleatly, honestly and however you want to take it.

Wow, I really don't know what to say... thats almost a first for me, almost.
But this is really, really great, spiffy, spankingly spiffy.

Kay, I'm freaking my self right out now.

I'm gonna have to find my boyfriend, he don't look like Sands but I'll turn off the light and pretend, savvy?
C'ya B.T

person PPL
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great you two, love it, thankyou
person PPL
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to write, its just left me without typing skills, amazing you two. Pleasure to read, now, where the hell is my husband ( ps his name is Jeffrey LOL !! )
person Aurelius
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit was that ever... good is such an inadequte word... perhaps exquiste? Mmmm damn. Very very nice!
person C.J. Davis
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Of course, I liked More than Life, and More THan Eyes Alone can See. Love this little piece. Keep it up Ladies!

C.J.
person Becc»
schedule February 20, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Totally random thought, but was it wise of Salida to use her credit cards? Because aren't they actually Tess'? Or am I just over-paranoid and anal-retentive?

Anyways, yay! I love Aida and Sands. Like, 50x more then I love Salida and Jeffery which is saying A LOT. Keep it up girlies! And seriously, Aida can't die. That's fifty percent thing is too dramatic. She's got to live or Sands is going to kill himself and then Salida will kill herself to be with Jeffrey and then where would the story be? Hrmmm?