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for More Than Darkness

by SaMe

person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 80

Oh

my

God.

I'm caught up!!! :-D Heh. Did you think that "Oh my God," was for something else? 0:-) All I have to say about this chapter is "WOW" LOL. Boy Aida surprised me in this one. :-p I'm just glad all is well now. Salida's got babies, Aida and Sands are back together and they're in the Caribbean! What more could be better?
person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 77

Wow... What an unbelievably crazy chapter!!! Sands not remembering Aida, false memories, and of course the climax of killing Sheldon. :-) Although... I'm beginning to really miss Jeffrey... :-p
person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 74

I love the interaction with others. It's nice to stray outside of the little group of Salida, Aida, Jeffrey, and Sands. And Quentin and Sheldon of course. ;)

Heh. And Sands posing as the priest-that's just classic! :-p

Ohh man nice cliffie! :-p Poor Aida... :-/ Kinda feel sorry for her. Man I swear... what a roller coaster of emotions for Aida and Sands this chappie!
person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 75

Wowzah. Yet another emotional roller coaster. Poor Aida. She's got more on her shoulders than anyone could imagine. Look at this! 2 in one day! Well... 1 1/2 as I read half of 74 last night... :-p
person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 76

Wow. A new record for me! 3 chapters in 24 hours. :-D How's that huh? Oooh the tension! Baaad Quentin. He's in for it now. >:) Mwahahahah.
person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 73

Yay! Another chappie down for the procrastinator! Sheesh! I swear Aida and Sands are horrible about being hot and cold. :-p I kinda feel sorry for Quentin though...

Sussanah's really lost her marbles hasn't she? :-p

I just might have to read another chappie tonight. 0:-)
person PS~SB
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 72

Woohoo! Another chappie down! Loved the whole Aida shaving Sands! :-p Meanie Sands showing Sheldon all those corpses!!! >:( Glad things seem to be getting better for Salida and Jeffrey.

Heh... Wish I could read another chappie but I don't have half an hour right now. It's almost 1:30 am. *sigh* Tomorrow. ;-)
person SS
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
74.
Wow, what a seesaw ride to come back to, pregnant, not pregnant, maybe later pregnant, betrayal, suicide, man, I've missed this so much, its brilliant writing as always you two, I can't wait to catch up on the rest.
person BB/LF
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's official. You guys are the best fan fiction writers to ever grace the face of this earth.

That was an AMAZING chapter. AMAZING.

Can you guys make this into a TV show or something? ; )
person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 70...Feel so bad for Salida-or rather Jeffrey for haiving to deal with her. That was adorable about Jeffrey wanting to paint her nails, and then singing to her! LOL Sooo different for him. :-p Great stuff! I'm catching up slowly but surely! ;)