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for More Than Darkness

by SaMe

person Sugarbutt (or PS)
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 71

Woohoo! Another Chappie down 6 to go! :-p Glad to see Aida and Sands put aside their differences. Or rather...not. 0:-) But whatever. They made up and alls ok. For now anyway. I know you two! :-p You can't play that innocent with me. I know trouble's just on the horizon...
person SS
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was one mighty nice piece of lovin' you put together there you two. (:-Þ) Ghosts? Holey Schmoley, they were great, I'd really missed those two LOLOL. I thought Aida was a goner, but I guess that would spoil the story a trifle huh? I really enjoyed it, thanks bunches.
person SS
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sexual stick figures, do I really need these images at 7am? Loved the shave with the cut throat, but not the idea about a bald Sands, although the hair to the feet comment was worth it. Poor Sheldon, you guys really did a number on him didn't you? Graveside heebie geebies, talk about goosepimples. Sands/Jeffrey is really cracking up, huh?
person SS
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When Quentin turned up I thought you two were starting to brew some trouble, but it didn't turn out that way at all. I felt robbed that the shaving scene didn't eventuate, but thats just me. Thanks you two as always, it was great, I'll be back for more, you can count on it.
person SS
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holey guacamoley, 30 pages of pussyfooting around, you guys are just brilliant at it, poor Des and I hope you both feel guilty about slicing the wildcat. Rotflmao about the worry warts (:-Þ) Thanks you two as always, but get on with it.
person SS
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow, that was a trip and a half, glad Sands got back in one piece more or less, Jeffrey and Salida are so frustrating, have I told you both lately that I hate you ;D and your writing drives me crazy? I suppose it would be a trifle presumptious to ask for more huh?
person SS
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After 5 attemps and many many interruptions I finally got to the end of the chapter *cheers*
WHAT have you two done?
Sands is going to go off the deep end, whats the next chapter called 'the wrath of Sands' ? LOL
Haven't wanted the next chapter as badly as this for a LONG while, so are you going to prolong the agony or what?
Am I going to have to beg? Scroll? Whine? Just tell me what lengths I need to go to, to get the next chapter up OK?
person SS
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dun dun... and then there was five (well seven actually if you count the two babies not yet born)
so how much more complicated can you two really try and get this story huh? great, great chapter looking forward to the next one, thankyou both.
person SS
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
65

Three boxes of tissues later, well that was pretty emotional to say the least. How have you two made this story so real, that it makes me cry buckets of tears? The moment the baby was put in Salidas arms and Jeffrey looked, I was blubbering, and now writng this I'm laughing my head for writng that, I hate you two (:-Þ)
person SS
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
see? I was so moved, I even forgot the chapter number ^^^^^^ it was 66 .