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for More Than Darkness

by SaMe

person SS
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 60, do you two realise its 60 chapters?
Is that a record or what?
This has to be the best story on the planet, thanks you two.
Onwards to the next 60 chapters (:-Þ)
person Arenas
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? Domestic SJ learning to barbecue? Whoa... I never saw it coming. I already said I loved the letter. The interrogation (round 1?) was very much worth it. Kudos! There needs to be more Sands tickling. Perhaps at lower heights, but either or, doesn't bother me. I'd say Jeffery and Sands should be gentler, but that's part of the macabre humor that keeps me comig back. So yeah, um...I'm ready for another update whenever...
person SS
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that sure was an uncomfortable feeling throughout the chapter, but I was laughing my butt off all the way through it, especially 'the hug', I'd give you a million (if I had it) to see the expression on Sands face in reality. LOLOLOLOLOL. thanks for such a quick update you two.
person SS
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh, I forgot to say, I melted when Sands picked up the bunny and shoved it under his arm, but was shocked when Jeffrey didn't make a wisecrack.
person SS
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had a smile on my face for the most of that chapter, except for the bits where I was rolling around on the floor in laughter, I've got a couple of questions for you two.. Whats a familiar? and what tattoo was Sands talking about? I have got to get me a copy of that 'Cover Stealers' book. The best line in the whole chapter was the ~overcooked noodle~ one. On with your plotting you two, I have got to read how Sands gets to 10 points. Thankyou both.
person Arenas
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the tables have turned. None of that pesky Jeffrey/Salida angst, no, it's Sands/Aida angst! What a very jampacked chapter. Jeffrey about to cry because of the photo... well, I'll admit I felt a couple of tugs on the heartstrings. Aida and Sands coming to grips, Salida and the scarves. And all because of my favorite trio of agents. Hot smeep! I'm looking forward to this next chapter. Not that I ever don't but... you know. I might have to use 'please' more often.
person Arenas
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I really realized how much I missed this story. Holy carp on a stick, you killed Valencia! Although, I do have to point out that Bon-bon is nowhere near as bad. You're going to cure SJ, right? I mean... I think I have a right to be concerned. Golly, you're both driving me insane. When's this next chapter coming out?
person SS
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah, that was intense to say the least, my palms are sweating and I couldn't read fast enough, I have tears running down my cheeks, oh boy I am way too involved with this fic, you guys never ever will cease to amaze me, that was one unreal ride.
I got to go back and read it again just to read the bits I must have skipped just to read it. That was just the best chapter ever. Thanks you two.
person SS
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All caught up :-D

Bring on the in-laws and the car shopping.. woohoo!!
person SS
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Opera? that was unexpected, so what was in the present anyway? Is Valencia going to get worse? These chapters are so long and yet they fly right by and its at the end before I know it, one more left and then I'm up to speed with you guys. Thanks as always, you two are truly the best.