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for More Than Darkness

by SaMe

person SS
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh boy, I really missed this fic, they nitpicked all the way through that chapter Sands and Aida, Jeffrey and Salida, why do you make them do that? I don't really want to know. Valencia is getting interesting. I have a whole 3 chapters to catch up on, how amazing is that? I never thought in a million years that you'd be 3 chapters up on me. :-P
person Arenas
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, it took me awhile, but I must say that it was more than worth it. Those were some fun chapters. I'm not quite sure what I meant by fun... with Sands leaving Aida behind, Jeffrey losing no matter what he said and so forth, but... maybe that's just the new face of angst? Happy Birthday Aida, it sure was an interesting one. Now Jeffrey car shopping... I would like very much to see that... Course, I'd like to meet Aida's folks too. Let the interrogation begin!
person SS
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww wow, you posted another chapter really quickly, that should keep me going for a month or so, Jeffrey and Salida haven't been together for simply ages. Thanks you two, seeya in 2005, have a great Christmas.
person Arenas/DX
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And the angst comes crawling in... I'm incredibly happy that you updated again so quickly, however... I can't help but feel it may have been my fault you held back so long. Don't answer that. Poor Jeffrey and Salida. And the pool table! The pool table's sacred! I would like to see Jeffrey drive a minivan, but I could drive the Porsche! Yay for stick shifts! ;) So ah... yeah. When's Aida's birthday coming?
person Arenas
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fluff! I lime fluff! Not too light, not too angsty, juuuuuuuuust right. Sands had been needing a hug, and Aida too. Yay for Val! She's gotta be at least as fun as bastard. Different kind of fun, mind you. And might I add that if bastard's still alive, a little glimpse would be very much appreciated? Yeah, I'll add that. Veeeeeery nice, much anticipated chapter.
person SS
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You two had to leave it there, right at that particular spot didn't you? That isn't nice, at all. The big V was great, more of her please?? She does ruffle Aidas feathers well doesn't she? A quicker update would be mucho appreciated seeing how my computer priveledges are going to dry up soon. Thanks you two, fantastic as always.
person Arenas
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so incredibly glad I could catch up, even if it was awhile in coming. I missed this story. It's too much fun. And since Bastard's kinda dead and gone... can we have more Val? Pleeeeeeeeeeeease? Because aside from her totally awesome name, (heh...) I rather like a girl who looks out for her boys. So hopefully I can stay on top of these next chapters, but know that I am still reading faithfully, if not as frequently.
person SS
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
smashing chapter simply smashing, real cutting edge stuff there, roflmao, Valencia huh?? do you two have a thing against ORANGE? lolololol, this is brilliant, I lime it, bring on the big V some more.
person SS
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well Aida sure better get better quick, especially if she keeps talking like a wabbit to Sandsy. LOLOLOLOLOL. You two crack me up, more please? Soon please? Hurry up please? You're already taking too long please? etc etc etc. Thanks you two.
person SS
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two boys and a girl, consistency of vegemite, (spelled correctly) more killing, what more could a reader want? Except of course a quicker update. Thanks you two.