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for More Than Darkness

by SaMe

person SS
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters, no sleep for me, you two are very wicked, you know that right? So how come you made me so angry with Jeffrey and Salida huh? Bring on the other voices, I'm hooked, I want to meet them, how much worse could it possibly get? Don't answer that, I don't want to know ANYTHING.
person Arenas
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay... I really didnhinkhink I wanted to see Jeffrey explode from sexual repression. I still don't, really. I thinkfreyfrey may have to lose this one for his own good, but that's my two cents. I'm still for flashbacks... but I'll say no more on the subject. Excellent as always.
person Arenas
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jeffrey? A dastard? Nah. We love him too much for that. Much fun and smut. Well done.
person SS
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are both forgiven for now. (:-Þ)
person Arenas
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now we're even.

Ah dear evil, mean Bastard. You're madness will be slightly rued, but it's probably best if Sands doesn't go TOO insane. Is that possible? Well, I've got no doubt that you guys will find a way if it is. Good chapter. No more hospitals for Sands though.
person SS
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So heres the $64,000 question . . . what did you two do to Jeffrey? and how long do I have to wait to find out? This is not a good thing, believe me.
person Arenas
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Naked people are gross? Simply not enough words to describe my feelings for this chapter. Fantasmic... spiffy... in fact, I think I'd go so far as to say I lemon it. So ah... when's that next chapter going up?
person SS
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well if you two don't kill him soon, I would really really lime to. He's been hanging around long enough, and I don't like him, at all, not even to make the story better. Time to get him messy. Thanks as always you two.
person SS
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Perfection . . . Total puuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfection.
person Arenas
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy carp, you two! Do you realize how insane I went reading that chapter? Incredibly! Laughter to happiness to pervese pleasure to severe depression,elt elt it all. Now, see... that's exactly how insane I want to go next chapter. Maybe so much so that you need a warning label, 'Could be hazardous to your mental health and balance.' Not that I'm any judge, of course. Need more Sheldon and Jeffrey though. Maybe even a little Bastard to spice things up, and voila, that ambiguous recipe Aida wanted to invent. Reasonable?