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for Struggle For Control

by PiratesWench

person Jezzy the Jealous
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O ..whoooaa. That I did not expect.. what a twist! Is it wrong that I liked it? >.< Nooo! I don't want Mortie-poo to suffer! ..even though it's kinda fun.. >D ::Grabs Mort by his pretty, messy hair.:: Scream, angel! SCREAM!

AWESOME couple o' chappies! n.n

::Runs circles before fleeing under her bed.::
person EyesofanArrow
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wee! I love this story, as I've said many times before. More!!
person Jezzy the Jealous
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O Sho Shooter's not gonna like the idea of meds. Is he gonna pull anything wif Mort? He's not gonna try to kill Alex, is he? O.O;

Eee! Next! Next!
person Jezzy the Jealous
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo.. Is Mortie (*Smacks herself for her Tedd moment*)-- er.. is Mort gonna go all Shooter style on the shrink? I would. I hate shrinks. Even though DR. Harris seems really nice. I --hate-- shrinks. ::Snaps a finger and points at Dr. Shrink.:: Sic 'em, Shooter!

*ahem* ...

Well, besides that, this chapter was cruelly and apallingly short. Grah. I'm gonna check back the entire rest of the day. You just watch me. I will.

News: I saw SW for the 3rd time last night. I'm beginning to think I'm obsessed. @.@ What do YOU think, O awesome PiratesWench persona?

HEHE!! I'mma go seek out some Mountain Dew and watch Sleepy Hollow. ~.^ I LOVE JOHNNY DEPP!
person Jack\'s Pirate
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG so far this is the best fan fic I have read and I have read alot......anyways I like hte fact that you make new storys so often I had just finished reading ch 26 I gave the plus thingys saying it was s good story then I went back up and looked at what the last chapter was and then there was a new one in less then a minute after I was done there was a new one hmmmm maybe there is a new one now I MUST SEEE THIS STORY IS TOOOOOOO GOOOD!!!!!!!!! well i am so glad that Alex now knows about Shooter she is so kind to him and he is so kind to her (sorry I am a big fan of Romance it just makes you feel so happy all over) well uhh yah any ways nice job!!!!!
person Jezrael the Jealous
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I actually started freaking out when Mort was running to Alex's house, all crazy with Shooter behind him. I thought he was gonna go all mad on her.. Whew. I love being wrong. n.n

Aww! Their relationship is so real.. you do an excellent job in pairing personalities and writing romance. Or just writing in general.

It's official: I am addicted to this story.
person MmC
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! a secret window fan fic! and a good one too, i love how you have mort's conversations in his head.
person Sniper Higgins
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe! Wow. that was good. Not over done, but not underdone.....(?)

I can't wait for chapter 20!! hurry!!

~*Sniper
person Dawnie7
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww,that was sooo romantic!You are so great at writing this type of stuff.Kuddos for you my friend.
person Jezrael the Overly Seentaental
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh.. my.. god.. that one scene when Mort was with Alex's beebee stuck in my mind so bad I started tearing up. I could see it perfectly. Julia's a little cutie with a huge smile, beaming at her new, oversized friend, while Mort fusses with her and the bear, one of those adorable smiles on his face (the sort that makes you want to just grab him and squeeze him. nWW!)WW!)... Oooo! I loved this chapter!

..I can't take the suspense, however..

::Whines.:: Nooo.. I wanna know what's gonna happppeeennn..