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for A Gilded Cage

by SaMe

person anna melvin
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bah!!! get on with it. cliffhangers suck!!!!

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i remember when you posted this in deppimpact and now its here!! hehehehe. joy.

-anna
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I miss this story... what's happened? Are you not gonna continue?

.:Sara:.
person Miya Sparrow
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this, I like these kinda stories! I don't know, maybe I'v read way to many of them *shurg*. please update! I know its been a while, and I mean a really long while! but could you please update! please...I'm begging you!!!!!!!!!..
person Anon
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm very glad you have updated. I could hardly believe my own eyes :) I hope you will update soon, I really can't wait to read the next chapter. And now when Barbossa has found Jack and company... Jeezzz.......

.:Sara:.
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Forgive me for not reviewing more often! I've been reading this since the beginning of its prequel, and I say every time I read a chapter that I love it!

It is truly one of my favorite stories of all time!

I adore the history that you've given Jack. It's nothing like my picture, but it makes so much sense. Your writinig is magnificent save for just a couple of typos, but hey, it's WELL WRITTEN!

Please continue quickly. PLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE???

Hugs!

Hellborne
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A while ago I found 'Broken Wings' and I couldn't stop reading it. And then it didn't take long till I found this sequel and I've done nothing but read since then. And I thought I would reply know to both the first story and this one. When I read the first one I thought it was the most brilliant story I've ever read and this sequel is just as fantastic. I've never been one for curses, gods and demons and such things when it comes to reading. I have always thought that they were confusing, bad and horrible but you have opened a new window for me. So... update? Please? *puppy dog eyes*

.:Sara:.
person kitcat
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! Ecept one thing, Why'd you kill Will???????????????? is he really, really truly dead? Never coming back? Poor Elizabeth! Poor Jack! Why'd they go at each other like that, an outside influence? Keep going!! How will they break the curse this time.
person JohnnyDEPPManiac
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!
Poor Jack and his internal struggles/self hate.
I still am a little sad about your version of Will dieing...I liked him the way you made him.
Wouldn't have minded in the movie though...
Great job I hope you update soon!
person sallie
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've said it before and I'll say it again.
You're stories are great!!!!
person SS
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Merrie, how could you, gasp, choke, splutter?? You are definitely evil, doing that to poor Jack, I had tears rolling down my cheeks, wicked wicked lady. If nagging does that to ystorstories I am positively going to stop, nah just kidding, nagging is way too much fun. Wow what a chapter, take a bow kiddo, it was a beauty. Thanks.