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OYI! That was short? You know, I didnt' think that was short, but if you did, don't sweat it. Short's not bad when the content is powerful and your writing is just that! POWERFUL!
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I'm dying to know what happens next, mate.
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Please post again soon!

This has got to be the greatest, most well written, and original POTC fic ever! Your style is amazing and I love how you've crafted this into an incredible piece of work:) Loreis tis the bastard epitome of evil possessions, great charcaterion oon of him, and the struggles between Jack and himself. Now what about Edward? And the tattoo, didn't Lorelac say somewhere that he had no idea what it was? Hmmm...hope no one else gets possessed! Anywho great fic and thanks for the amazing read!

You evil lady! First you lead me on with such a wonderful sequel to such a wonderful story, then you LEAVE forever...then when you come back you give me a tasty tidbit and then leave me stranded again!

Bravo!

You really need to update more often though...when it's so long between chapters, I have to go back and read the previous one all over again (not a bad thing, really, but it takes so long with my eyes going bad)...

Please update soon! I've just got to see this one! And can't wait till Jack gets free from that bastard just to find the entire navy pointing guns at him...Poor Jack!

Hellborne

All right...now you've gone and done it! Write some more or suffer the consequences!

Great story! I read the first story only a few days ago for the first time, and now you've got me hooked.

And I like to get fixes for my addictions rather often, savvy?

So get to writing!

I love this story as well as it's predecessor! It's so wonderful to find a unique and truly amazing piece of writing likr this. the dialogue, the emotion, everything is perfect and completely in character. Finding out more about Jack's past is so interesting. I really want to know more about "Edward" and his family. And maybe when our Big Bad is defeated Jack can find his fy? Ay? And those markings...hmmmm...even more interesting. Where did those come from?
Great work, I love this fic!

Oh WOW i just read your entire story from start to finish and all i can say is aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you are so cruel leaving it like that i'm so glad your writing a sequel. it was honestly one of the best PotC fanfictions i've read (i've read quite a lot mind you) i just can't wait to find out what way your gonna take the plot i have so many questions
Like has Elizabeth become pregnant from the incedent on the beach, and if she has will she class it as Jack's or Lorelac's child
Will Jack ever be rid of this God or will he some how find a way to supress him inside his mind
Please update soon i really can't wait.......