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for Falling

by eccentricpirate

person Sparkler
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. Wonderful. Very well written, and I can't wait for more!
person aCharmedOne
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story. Hop it will go on soon. Like your stile.

Bye aCharmedOne
person Jen
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww...you made me cry, you already know that. Brilliant. ok...*botherbotherbother* heehee. <3
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In this time period, no they didn't have bathrooms. Technically called "the head" it was an area of the deck railing that was lower than the rest. If you watch the beginning of the movie POTC, you can see where young Elizabeth is standing and singing... the deck railing is curved lower.... That is the head/bathroom. Any inside bathroom activity would have been restricted to the upper officers of a ship, in a chamber pot, which would then be taken care of by the cabin boy.
person Kahlia
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK. This is a review for chapter 1. I'm about to go and get some food before I sit back down and read chapter 2. Great story so far. I'm such a sap for these 'Jack loves Will but wont say anything and Will loves Jack but thinks Jack'll kill him if he says anything' I never get tired of them.

So cute. Sleeping Jack Sparrow. Oops *looks around nervously as if expecting Jack to jump out at her waving a sword* Captain Sparrow. You can almost see it.

Keep writing. Never stop. You know why you should? Because I need a fresh supply of W/J fics.
person layne
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I'm enjoying all the inter play. Next chapter awaited.
person Herald Soucree
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurry! Update! Soon!
person Jen
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will: Morons- Jack quit antagonizing the author. Eccentricpirate Write more!
EP: Can?t I do my homework?
Will: No. Write. Now. Okay fine do your homework.


I feel like Will. ha. *hugs* Have I told you I love you lately? Now go write...err, your history essay. That's it.
person Frankenmuth
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...Tell me a story...

Eeeee *grins like mad*

Okay, so like, finish your story...or face my rath! (wrath? never was good at spelling)

I like it so far. Please write more

(p.s- I really suck at writing reveiws that tell the writer how good they write or how much they need to write more, I'm better and making them laugh...it's like, my job...so if ye want me to make you laugh, I can do that...review well, well sorry but it an't never gonna happen)
person Jennifer (Right?)
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love you. You know this. Love seeing the evolution of it from what you were writing in your spare all the way to this. *hugs* If you do not write more I shall be bored in Co op. Write.