rate_review Reviews

really nice story

Is there an imminent updating of this at any time? *pouts* C'mon, I even made an account specially to review you!
Anywhoodles, I'm gonna review everything I read up till now, since I just did it in one sitting.
Awesome *sort* of describes it. VERY well researched on several points including the torture methods. Interesting plot, good characterisation, sure you've heard it all before ;) Please keep writing!
One thing I'm not too sure on is what's going on with Jack and Tim? Is Jack not particularly monogomous towards Will, is Will okay with the sexual stuff, are they going to end up as a threesome or is Jack "helping" him out? :/
Cheers luv ;)
Jack-off-Spike (Claire)

I liked this story alot! are you still updating it? i would love to find out what happens next.
wow, that dr. tim! 13 inches!

I thought it was hilarious how jack just openly talks about how he had sex with another guy and will just cotinues on with the conversation!
do i foresee a threesome?

.....Going a bit hard on Jack, aren't you? Tortured, raped, mutilated, eyes ripped from their sockets, leg chopped off...Um... there isn't going to be much of Jack left to love soon.
I like a little 'Jack torture' too, but... I dunno, the empty eye sockets kinda turned me off to the story, and the severed leg finished the job. I think temporary blindness, or even blindess with eyes still intact would have been a better choice rather than having them torn out completely. That's icky.
However, despite all this, I have been a fan of your writing in the past and will continue to read your fics... but I just think you can only a torture someone so much per fic before it becomes excessive and predictable.

continue!

Really truly a good story.

Totally sexy.

Mmmm. I love me a good Jack and Will story.

oh. my. god. you took his leg too?! nooooooo! *sniff* my poor jacky...you are killing him one piece at a time aren't ya? eyes, leg, what's next, arms? I'm gonna need so much therapy after reading all this...

that was so not a flame, that was me feeling sorry for jack. I love your writing style, it really helps me visualize what's going on. are there going to be any bright spots in jack's future? why wasn't will jealous when he found jack and the doctor together? those are my only questions. I suppose I will have to keep reading this wonderful (if at times disturbing) fic you are working so hard on and I'm sorry you're not getting more reviews for it. I will be here for the next chapter!

oh, come on, keep going, im getting really into this!

I know you're no longer among us to see this, and I wish that were not so. Earth has lost a Hell of a writer, but Hell has gained a Hell of a soul.

There's a lot of love in you and it comes through everything I've seen you write; and it remains here with us, in everyone who remembers you and keeps what you did alive. Sometimes the only damn thing that helps anything is to get away from Earth for awhile and stories are the only way we can do that until they get better at spaceships.

Thank you for this story, Hellborne, wherever you are. I salute you, and I am glad we had you for the time we did. I'm raising a bottle of rum for you, savvy?

RM

Oh, I wished I had had the nerve to commend your writing before now. You are greatly missed Hellborne.

You wrote wonderfully, and I will miss it terribly, and when you read this review in heaven, I hope you smile brightly and lightly pet your muses who gave you such inspiration.

I am going to always read your stories over and over, and save them as to always treasure the caliber of writing.

Blessings,
Kathryn K.