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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful start.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mm, hullo. ^_^
very interesting story... poor jack though... he so tortured...
Like they way you make him speak with the accents when he's injured, makes it more real.
hope the rest is posted.
very interesting story... poor jack though... he so tortured...
Like they way you make him speak with the accents when he's injured, makes it more real.
hope the rest is posted.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jack he's been through so much ...please keep updating...great story...
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! your fic is so awesome! fairly sad at times, but super amazing!and you really seem to put a lot of time and effort into doing research before you wrote the story! It's very impressive! I got a really angry review one time because i didn't do any research before writing my fic... but your story is so well written and I've really enjoyed reading it! I hope you get the chance to update again soon!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's a very good story. But poor Jack without his eyes. I realy feel sorry for him. But this is not a Harry Potter fic so I dont hope for a miracle heeling for his eyes.
Hope you will go on with it soon
Bye aCharmedOne
Hope you will go on with it soon
Bye aCharmedOne
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you're a great writer and this is a great story don't give up on it because a few people won't review!!! i love it please update soon!!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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I love you. <3 ):
I love you. <3 ):
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so far... fabulous! i'm liking this story, though i'm rather curious to see just what is going to happen with that sapphire. please do continue.
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i'm sorry to hear about you're helth conditon..even though i don't know what it is but anyway this story is great you should continue! i read half yesterday and half today. I'm in love with this story I can't wait to see what happens next. But from some reason I thought Tim was an older man...I might've been anxious to read and i might have skipped over what he looks like but what does he look like? Ah anyway I heart this story update soon!! I can't wait!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is me, telling you off. I would have reveiwed each and every time you told me too, but I was determined to get to the last chapter available. This story was a beautiful thing, though I wish that the battle were more detailed and longer. BUT, I understand how much of a challlange that can be...Oh, and somehow Jack's abduction and crucifuction seemed quite sudden, like the reader didn't have enough suspense to actually worry about what may have happened to Jack. Also a challange right there, so I forgive and understand completly and eagerly await your next update.