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Suns of beaches!!! Gotta whack that cardinal. And who is that gnarly philistine pirate that hands Jack over to him?? Bummer. Gotta get Jack off of that cliff. Let Will blow it up. and the cardinal--and BTW, also whoever was standing watch the night that Jack got grabbed. I also need to know just how they snuck Jack off that ship---incase it is a technique that I want to use sometime. Cardinals get all the fun. I know you're gonna hurt Jack, and I accept that---but it would be really nice if Jacob gets to rescue him---and Jack tells him he does a good job. I know, in my dreams......in my dreams, that's it exactly.

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This is a really good story I love it! Please please please continue this and update as soon as possible. :)

Oh me, oh my.
This storie is so detailed and rich, it puts quiet a number of others to shame. I hope you don't keep us waiting too long for more.

Simply fabulous, hon! This is one of the better PotC fics I've read. Very well written, accurate, and the strong grasp of medical history makes Witch a remarkable story that I'd recommended to any friend -well, if I had any that appreciated the finer qualities of slash. ^.^ Please keep up the good work! I'm dying to find out just how Will plans to pull off a full-blown attack on the cathedral -also, the relationship between Jack and his son? I love it! Love it love it love it! Also, the thing with Tim and Jack came out of nowhere, knocking me completely for a loop! Will bettern thn that lovefest before long, too. A lonely Will does not a threesome make.
Again with the "love it!" part,
Kel of "Shooting alcohol from one's nose is not a particularly pleasant experience." Mayhem

Err... P.S.

Completely random question here, but... I once did a project about the Spanish Inquisition. I hope I'm not getting my 1800 history mixed with my 1600 history-or what the hell ever; I suck with the memory for dates part- but I once read that, when a woman concieved more than one child at the same time-usually twins- one was considered evil as one was considered good, and both were killed, as was the mother (for she was considered a consort of the devil or something; remember, not-good-with-history-stuff girl here). So... Norrington's twin brother?

However, please feeee tee to correct me if I'm wrong. I'm just curious... and currently unable to look it up myself. ^.^; Heh. Sorry.
Love, Peace, & Chicken Grease,
Kel of "I Love MY CAT tolerates me." Mayhem

Well, I dont want Jack's son to get killed. you can chew him up a little, but not kill him. and we havent even met norry's brther yet. does jack's son kill norry's brothher? or do they go run away together. norry cant kill his won twin either. or does he. would norry kill his twin, or at least shoot him to save Jack? the last scene here is such a sramatic scene. gread surprise ending. and i dont wonder that abernathy is asleep after all that.

OK, it's raining outside right now, I don't think, that your eyes have to be brown, but I like your story and want you to gon on writing, so I DID hit the review-button and am reviewing... =)
I don't like the fact, that now Tim is Jack's lover too - I loved the thought of Will being the only important one to him... - but I get to like Norrington more and more - write more about him...

Aysha

The weather in southern Oklahoma is currently 79 degrees and partly cloudy with winds from the south, southeast at 6 mph. All in all a pleasant spring day. *S*


Well...you *did* say we could tell you about the weather. I'll give you a bonus and actually say something about the story as well.

I'm enjoying the story thus far. You've got a good plot going and I like the historical details that you include. Norrington's twin brother/pirate is an interesting twist. Well done. I'll be looking for more.

ooohhh, i like this story!!! update soon please! :)
Suzy xxx

I absolutely LOVE this story!! you have to keep going!! I like your plot, very good i must say!!!
Now be a good lass and finish atleast a few more chapters for us loyal fans!!!!!! I like norrigton having a pirate for a twin, very good idea i must say!!!
and you need to give us a good description of Jack's lovely new bed mate Tim, the good ol' doctor that he is!!
Anyway i cant wait to read more, keep up the good work, this is a very good fanfic that i cant wait to read more of!!!!!
~Deathy