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>Will James kill his brother? Will Jack kill his son?
Will Jamie explain how his brother became a pirate? Will he impersonate his then dead twin and captain a pirate ship himself? Will Jack explain where he got that son from and why he hates him so?

Fabulous simply fabulous darling! I must have more! I'm really caught up in the storyline. It's very well done! How are the ferrets by the way? I hope they're giving you ideas for this story. It's awesome.

update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

Please continue...I'd like the answers to the questions you listed! I like your original characters--they seem well thought out.
I hope life starts to be better for you soon!

Hellborn! Why are you not posting anymore? There ARE reviews!!! Please, I am so impatient!!!
POST, POST, POST!!!
I like the story - I love your description of Will - allthough he may be a little OC - but that's OK - I prefer your version anyway... =)

Now come on and: POST another chapter!!!

FANTASTIC!!! Jack a whitch? What a glorious idea! And he has a son... - I love your story! Please post more!!!!

Oooooooohhh....nice. *licks lips in anticipation* I love that line 'like a starfish to a small rock' but wouldn't a barnacle be more appropriate? Then again, a barnacle doesn't have arms does it? A tad slow, but nice. Shall be waiting and watching.

I now read up to chapter 12 and I still like it very much - it's rather realistic, or at least: it's based on real facts - and that's what I like about it. Wonderful! Please go on posting!

I read your story till chapter 9 until now, but I intend to read on, cause I like your style and how you describe Jack - he's believable and I like, that you explaioned, what he was doing and his reactions.

The bad part is short, but still there. It's about this part: "Mein kleiner depp sohn, steigt mein schiff ab, und nächste zeit, ist ein wenig schöpferischer in ihrer wahl der namen.*” and "My little moron, get off my ship, and next time, be a little more creative in your choice of names.”

My first language is german and I didn'T understand, what you wanted to express until I read the nglish translation... - I'd suggest you change it into: "Mein kleiBastBastard! Runter von meinem Schiff und nächstes Mal, sei etwas kreativer in deiner Namenswahl!" - which means the same in actual german ;-)

Please go on, I want to read more about that!

WHOA! that took me by complete surprise! that was great! haha i can't wait to see what happens next!
seriously tho. the good doctor was good for more'n just doctoring! perfectly evil! ahaha soooo next chapter please??hehe

*begs* Please please please please please please write more!

PLEASE!!!!!

I love this story!

(also, I suck at productive reviews, I just try to make the reader of the review laugh)

*smiles sweetly* Please write more? I'll do/give whatever you want!