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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good one! I'm liken this story! keep it up!
update soon.
-Chelsey-
update soon.
-Chelsey-
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do think you're an excellent writer with very original stories!!! I would love to see some action in some upcoming chapters!!! Do Jack, Norrington, and Will get kidnapped by the Cardinal??? Please don't delete your stories! I am always reading!!
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!! I love this story!!! please continue! i cannot wait to see what happens...
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! hmmmm..... yeah, WOW covers it nicely! Continue the AWESOME work with this story! I love Jack's son..... a definite chip off the old block. Looking forward to the next chapters!
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still average. I know there was quite a lot of action in the first few chapters but it's not enough in the last/current few! You might be building, but build quickly! Or the tower will come crashing down on you. loved the detail about the tortures but where has it gone to now? you could do the detail of the ships and their respective captains. will u be bringing in some 'real-life' pirates? if not, all your effort in the first few chapters will have come to naught. you should continue at least slightly in the same vein, to blend fact and fiction... that would be best, given your start but otherwise it's fine. btw the doctor and jacob now seem to be superfluous... unless you have more plans for them, then at least foreshadow!
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE! Amazing story! REALLY! LOL.. Norrington amuzed at the presence of Jacob and how he infuriates the pirate. Brilliant!
Ok.. MORE!!!!!!! And while you're at it.. More on your Holiday story! Jack went overboard after the storm!!?? DREADFUL CLIFFHAGER!!! MORE MORE MORE.. OF EVERYTHING!
Ta
Overly obsessed and enthusiastic
Jackfan2
*grumbling the MSN and AOL aren't friends and you can't join our fledgling schooner...* No offense mate, but we'd rather have your great stories there too! But we've many a young writer and are stearing clear of slash, for now. But, anywho.. our loss at not having you there.
Ok.. MORE!!!!!!! And while you're at it.. More on your Holiday story! Jack went overboard after the storm!!?? DREADFUL CLIFFHAGER!!! MORE MORE MORE.. OF EVERYTHING!
Ta
Overly obsessed and enthusiastic
Jackfan2
*grumbling the MSN and AOL aren't friends and you can't join our fledgling schooner...* No offense mate, but we'd rather have your great stories there too! But we've many a young writer and are stearing clear of slash, for now. But, anywho.. our loss at not having you there.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i LOVE this one!!! i read two chapters of the morpheous one but this one kicks far more ass! goooo ferretmom!!! more raunch...must have more raunch in this one....and keep going...its awesome!!!
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I used another online translator to translate Jack's little statment, and here's what it gave me:
"My small depp son, my ship descends, and next time, is a little creative in its choice of the names."
*sniggers* I think I like your translation better. But this one is funny. ^_^;
"My small depp son, my ship descends, and next time, is a little creative in its choice of the names."
*sniggers* I think I like your translation better. But this one is funny. ^_^;
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's brilliant. Please, write more!
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I wish you could have author alerts on this site :/ Great last 4 chapters, although I have to say, I'm rather suspicious of the good doctor. He's not trying to get Jack hooked on laudanum is he? You have a good medical knowledge. Do you look things up, or are you something to do with medicine?