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It was good to see another chapter of Witch. I do like your doctor.

Well I just love this story!!! I love the fact that Will just kidnapped the commodore for help commanding that will be really interesting to see how the other pirates react to Commodore being involve. Oh and I can so see why the Cardinal would see the doctor as a Witch. I mean come on he use almost modern skill to treat wounds and even medicence that some people back in that time period thought was just spells or something like that. Anyway I can't wait for the next update because like I already said I just love thiory.ory.

Chapter 9 gets funnier everytime i read it. there are so many laugh lines in it. I am constaantly amazed. still. forever

Ih, loved the fanfic so far so I figured I'd drop in a nice little review. I really like the fanfic so far (not through reading it, though) poor Jack. . .I'm actually watching Pirates of the Caribbean right now. . .it's kinda weird reading this while watching it. . .anyway, I checked out that torture site thingy and oh my gods, some of the stuff in there is awful! We are learning about mideival *sp* tortures and stuff in school, so this isn't COMPLETELY new to me or anything but wow. . .just. . .wow. . .Anyway, I'll stop writing this incredibly way-too-long review

This a great chapter. Love the detail. Love jack's kid. Too bad they have the feisty relationship--but i guess it couldn't be any other way could it? Spatz is about twenty, no? Fun seeing all the pirates at a party. That is going to be quite a fleet that commodore sparrow commands. Henry Morgan had a fleet like that on one raid. but they didn't do anything close to demolishing an entire cliff. Now is Will the devil? or is Jack? Of course Jack isn't afraid of th devil. The devil has hooves and horns. that means he only eats grass. Nothing to be afraid of there. It is brilliant how you had the captains all suspicious of each other and at the same time all agreeing on a goal. love the guns all whipping out at Spatz. What is is with this doctor? I mean, we all love Jack, we all want to give him baths--even Will gets into the act. Nuthing to be ashamed of doc, say it I LOVE JACK. now Im laughing. thank you for writing such good stuff. this chapter is as fine as anything Ive read in fan fic and that is a lot I tell you. wilck tck torture the crdinal? or will he just lock him up and let him worry about it for a couple years

What you wanted to say is "Mein kleiner Depp, verschwinde von meinen Schiff und sei das nächste Mal bei der Namenswahl ein bisschen kreativer." I know because I am Austrian, i.e. speak German. Just in case you desperately want the "son" to be in, use "Deppensohn" instead of just Depp. You could say that, but the other sounds better. I'm not sure where they use "Depp" actually, we rather say Trottel here (was funny when Charlie's Angels: Full Throttle was released, though). Poor Johnny. He'll have to take my name when we get married.

what? no more story?! but...but...i just found it! you can't do this to me, please, no, it's too good.
seriously now, this story really is good: extra realistic (although some of that realism - the surgery - almost had me squicked to the point of no return), and thought out, and so well written that i didn't know i was reading for an hour straight. Your characters seem a little off from what i usually read in fanfics, but that's good - you're different, and i'm getting bored with whiny!will. i'm really into your tale and i hope you continue it so i can find out what happens to the doctor's modesty and jack's son!
i'm off to find out if all your fics are as great as this one. ciao!

Whoa! This is good! Shall give better review when i'm more awake.

> (Translation done through ets.freetranslation.com, so don’t blame me…
I don't blame you, but that translation is really curling up my fingernails. If I were you I'd rather stick to the method: "text in between ## is supposed to be German". That should be easier to read for most readers anyway.
> I’ve other stories that have been neglected too long,
>so for the next week I’ll be putting a chapter into each one,
>along with a startup of a new story: “In the Arms of Morpheus (Book 2) – The Bloom Files”.
YESSSSS! *dancing around in circles chanting and drumming*

I love this story ^-^. I always wanted Jack and Will to be together when I saw the film and now it´s reality. *g*
About your German, heres a correction from what you wrote: "Mein kleiner Idiot, verschwinde von meinem Schiff und sei das naechste Mal ein wenig kreativer in der Wahl deiner Namen." You write the ae like a "ä", but I don´t know if you can thatthat letter the right way.