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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very original!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Will someone try to take over the ship??? I can never predict the twists you make in your chapters!!! Keep going!!!
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned how I like this fic? hee. It was a wonderful sex scene! I was willing to read some smut today! Jack & Will are just the best pairing ever! ^___^ Please update soon,can't wait to see where this is going! It'd be nice if you mentioned more about the ones who have harmed Jack.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The stroy is awesome! I absolutely love it. Your approach to handling the medicinal and surgical aspects of the fic are great; they make it seem plausible. And I ly lly love the relationahip between Jack and Will as Jack explained it. (With Will being the more dominating one^_-)
You're treading dangerous waters with the Biblical talk of sodomy. (Though I agree... heh) Possible flames on the horizen! (Ignore them, no good comes from discouraging great work!)
Don't stop writing, I love this fic! ^_^V
You're treading dangerous waters with the Biblical talk of sodomy. (Though I agree... heh) Possible flames on the horizen! (Ignore them, no good comes from discouraging great work!)
Don't stop writing, I love this fic! ^_^V
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks hard*
I am no Catholic but am deeply religious...in a strange way, considering I am very dark and support slash so much I sometimes wish I were a gay male. But really, all that stuff you said there about male love in the bible...I'm trying to resist the temptation to grab my own bible and skim through it. I know in my Book Of Mormon they say that it is forbidden...but if it says it isn't in the Greek Bible then...oh crap.
LOOK WHAT YOU DID!! NOW I'M CONFUZZLED!!!
Bloody lost innocence. Ain't it grand how LotR has killed annocnnocence in so many people in this world? The fanfiction that has evolved from it has become slashier and darker than ever before. And I say this now, the only reason why PotC has tons of fanfiction too is because Ringers know Orli is in it and therefore they want to expand upon his elven purity, and non-Ringers simply like the PotC fanfic they read and wanted to try it themselves.
It's all Lord of the Rings fault...dammit, I WAS nice and spiritual before July 2002 when I read my first slashch wch was Legolas/Frodo (I seriously thought it was something about the elf teaching the hobbit swordfighting and was super stunned shiteless when I read it...but I got hooked anyway). But now I am a dark, sadistic slasher of unimaginable proportions that many would be fearing as I look so nice and innocent in real life.
http://aptafanfic.topcities.com
Thats my new fanfic site, go check if ye want to. I only support dramatic fiction and the more the merrier I say. Your's fits into that catagory...but I'm STILL trying to fix my brain after it fell apart about the bible thing.
ARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Vana E the Sadist~
I am no Catholic but am deeply religious...in a strange way, considering I am very dark and support slash so much I sometimes wish I were a gay male. But really, all that stuff you said there about male love in the bible...I'm trying to resist the temptation to grab my own bible and skim through it. I know in my Book Of Mormon they say that it is forbidden...but if it says it isn't in the Greek Bible then...oh crap.
LOOK WHAT YOU DID!! NOW I'M CONFUZZLED!!!
Bloody lost innocence. Ain't it grand how LotR has killed annocnnocence in so many people in this world? The fanfiction that has evolved from it has become slashier and darker than ever before. And I say this now, the only reason why PotC has tons of fanfiction too is because Ringers know Orli is in it and therefore they want to expand upon his elven purity, and non-Ringers simply like the PotC fanfic they read and wanted to try it themselves.
It's all Lord of the Rings fault...dammit, I WAS nice and spiritual before July 2002 when I read my first slashch wch was Legolas/Frodo (I seriously thought it was something about the elf teaching the hobbit swordfighting and was super stunned shiteless when I read it...but I got hooked anyway). But now I am a dark, sadistic slasher of unimaginable proportions that many would be fearing as I look so nice and innocent in real life.
http://aptafanfic.topcities.com
Thats my new fanfic site, go check if ye want to. I only support dramatic fiction and the more the merrier I say. Your's fits into that catagory...but I'm STILL trying to fix my brain after it fell apart about the bible thing.
ARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Vana E the Sadist~
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say, excellent work! I especially like the new spin that you've created by bringing religious practices into the picture. People tend to ignore all of the pain caused in the quest to stamp out the so-called evils of paganism, and its great that you've been able to merge this in with Pirates. Besides, i just love JackxWill :grins:
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Thank God. I have been looking for nigh 3 hours for just ONE halfway decent piece of Jack/Will fiction to read before I turn my attention back to work. Thank goodness for this one. And Jackfan2, if you're reading this, did you tell me about this one and I forgot? Or were you keeping this gem to yourself? Hmmm???? Or were you worried I would see the two parallels between this story and "Echoes" and stop writing "Echoes"?
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Anyway, you're doing a lovely job with this one! I loved Tim's reaction. "SODOMITES???" He might as well have said "Silly pirate. Dicks are for chicks." (I haven't heard that for so long. Hehehe) But I've got a great line for him. It's from RENT by Jonathan Larson and comes in the midst of a song in which the characters are raising their glasses to a number of things. And the line is "To sodomy. It's between God and me." Thought I'd share.
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And now since I'm babbling... I must cease and desist the attempt at intelligent discourse. Good night.
Love,
e-Rae-Rae
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Anyway, you're doing a lovely job with this one! I loved Tim's reaction. "SODOMITES???" He might as well have said "Silly pirate. Dicks are for chicks." (I haven't heard that for so long. Hehehe) But I've got a great line for him. It's from RENT by Jonathan Larson and comes in the midst of a song in which the characters are raising their glasses to a number of things. And the line is "To sodomy. It's between God and me." Thought I'd share.
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And now since I'm babbling... I must cease and desist the attempt at intelligent discourse. Good night.
Love,
e-Rae-Rae
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant! I can just imagine Jack being the most awkward patient ever, having to stay in bed, no rum, not sailing his Pearl, not seeing the horizon & no sex! Poor Jack! Love it, please please please write more ASAP.
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love the surgery chapter. Gots blood. And will is...well, it was funny before watching him be drunk, but now he is just to die for. hic. love it. I can see him. I ccan hear him. Baddles. of course. love you for this, very funny very
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
me wife william. very funny. and the little wrinkle and the look of confusion. Jack is going to wake up with more brusise if he isn't careful. lets see, he talked the doc into rum----Jack is going to lie and say that it is working even if it isn't just so he gets the rum, you know that. The laudenum makes him giggle. I hope he remembers that. and feels bad aabout it---fie on him for tortureing will. I love the part about will making use of the bucket. sooo funny. wow i am horrible for laughing at sick people. im terrible, hee hee. its your fault. giggle giggle---stop making me laugh. I am crying I am laughing so hard. what could ever have possessed jack to enter the priesthood? ah wonder. very elegant foot brace I must say.
Now, the white powder, several things it could be. Im betting it is cocaine. it is going to make Jack feel, very nice. he may still feel pain, but he wont give a damn! Poor doctor is getting dragged over the coals though. first admitting he has been a stup about helping the cardinal and then getting someone he can actually help and finds out---sodomites. oh the pain. hee hee serves him right. thank you thankyou for the line about will getting kicked in the head by gold feet-----wow. such detail. I mean such detail. every line has some little goody in it. I;ll never forgive you for making me laugh at a torture fic. Im dying here. could get injured here if ll dll down. I might. oh jack, pass the laudenum.
Now, the white powder, several things it could be. Im betting it is cocaine. it is going to make Jack feel, very nice. he may still feel pain, but he wont give a damn! Poor doctor is getting dragged over the coals though. first admitting he has been a stup about helping the cardinal and then getting someone he can actually help and finds out---sodomites. oh the pain. hee hee serves him right. thank you thankyou for the line about will getting kicked in the head by gold feet-----wow. such detail. I mean such detail. every line has some little goody in it. I;ll never forgive you for making me laugh at a torture fic. Im dying here. could get injured here if ll dll down. I might. oh jack, pass the laudenum.
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
white powder. salicylic acid powder. willowbark. asprin. of course. Im going, why would he give him coke and opium at the same time. and swelling hmmmm. finally got it. very nice. did I mention that im a fool?. id have killed jack with two major drugs, but he'd have died happy and in no pain. I love how he has to look at everything with only one eye. you keep the continuity all the way through. closes one eye, Im ejoying it too much gotta stop this multiple reviews