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for Labyrinth: Second Coming

by DrFantasmo

person ashley
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, i love this!!!!! i'm gonna be on a tangent here, but you know how in the game Alice, alice in wonderland is revisited, but now it's all dark and scary? that was the thing that stuck in my head while reading this story, like it was the Alice of Labyrinth; the in kin kingdom tainted and rapes, not that it was perfect and sweet to begin with of course, butnow that it's torn even more...god, i just get shivers. hehe. you have to finish this, i have to know what happens!!!!!
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You just gotta finish this story!! Its sad, its cruel, its love!! *blushes and holds cheeks*
person Little Tenshi
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Critisim, mh? Well let me see...
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No, sorry! Can't think of anyting critising!
But the story started very good!
I hope you write more soon!! ^_^
person weisskatzchen
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU ROCK!
it rules and i love it...ha ha..i made omi and nagi read it two...
they liked it as well...
much luck!
love-the kitten