rate_review Reviews

I think this was a wonderful story. And it shows you how the world really is just with a little twist. Life isn't really butterflies and rainbows for everybody and reality has a way of showing you that in terrible and horrible was. The story was a really good one.

cool! dark and...odd but cool. You know what I find interesting? everyone picks on Will! He's the one who gets hurt, raped, killed, ect. its really weird hehehehe, of course i'm not complaning about it. Although I'm a little upset with Jack *shakes head* that was disappointing. anyway! it was still good!

i don't review much, but i think your story has a unique twist to a potc fic. It's really interesting and can suck a reader into it, i hope you continhis his fic because i will return and read it!

Sorry I didn't leave my name. I don't have an account on AFF. First of all, I really like your writing! It's a wonderful relief from all the boring, cliches for J/W slash. Don't let this one little flame get to you. At least the flamer left ducaducated flame. Trust me, it could have been worse. To me, every story put on AFF and any other fan fiction site is a work of art. Some art is better than others. This story is an expression of yourself. I think it's wonderful. Please keep it!!

I didn't think it was a waste of my time. It was definitely dark and certainly made me stop and say 'Whoa'. Whether you should take it down or not. . .well, that's only one flame, and you're going to get those, unfortunately. All you can do is just ignore it and keep writing.

I didn't think there were any Mary Sues. Spellcheck would be nice, but hey, we all make mistakes.

I don't think you should take it down. Though it is a bit depressing, I still think it was an interesting read. But hey thats just my opinion.

No girl, don't take it off, i loved it! Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase don't take it off :D

Lovingelves
author Will love be the saviour :D

Nah, leave it up. It's their own problem. "If they don't like, why'd they read" and "You need to look up WARNING, apparently" and all those other cases.

I, for one, tht yht your fic veryvery nicely written. :)

Well....it wasn't the ending I thought it was going to have...but it was a good story and well written...don't take it down and try not to let the opinions of others make yhinkhink your stuff is bad. Hope to read another fic soon. Keep up the good work.

dammit. i just reviewed and then lost my internet connection and it didn't go through and i have no idea what i said.

ok, *calms down* i now feel obligated to review (which I should do anyway, b/c it's just polite since i'm reading other ppl's works). I wanted to articulate my mixed feelings on this story. this is VERY different from what I usually read because there was hurt, but no comfort (no chance for that since will killed himself). altho i understand where you're coming from and it seems like that's will's only logical choice. i read this the first day you posted it and i still haven't decided whether will's crazy or jack really was a vampire. if you were going to expand upon it i would ask for a chapter in jack's point of view. despite the pain inflicted upon will, i'm kinda glad jack didn't abandon him and 'loved' him back in some way (i'm sick, i know). another thing that made me happs ths that mr. + mrs. turner made an appearance (it's nice to seem them alive for once). i especially like that bill was an asshole because that seems to be taboo in this fandom.

my point - you should definitely keep your story up because some everyone has different tastes and there will be ppl who like it and ppl who don't, but all in all it was a well written story with an intriguing and original premise. you've provided us with a bit a diversity; and diversity's always a gohinghing.