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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*growls* Stupid AFF (sorry, I had this really nice review all typed ond ind it like ate it go something and now it's gone! *crys*)
I'll try again.
I don't think you should get rid of this story. I thought you did a good job of writing a hop hope you will continue to write other stories as well. I believe that if you are willing to put what you write out here to be read it has a right to be here. You put something you wrote online so people could see it and that takes guts. (Guts I personally don't have yet) Flamers, I think, just get kicks from bringing other's down and by taking the story off you are doing just that, beinging yourself down. Not every person rea read and like every story but that does not mean that they can insult the writer of the story just because they didn't like it. I liked your story, while dark and rather depressing I thought you did a good job of putting feeling behind the work. Please don't let what one person says get you down. Writing is a part of yourself, never change the way you write unless you want to, you could write the best story in the world and there would still be people who would say it sucks. You can't let them get to you.
I hope you will write another story soon, I'd love to see what comes out next.
I'll try again.
I don't think you should get rid of this story. I thought you did a good job of writing a hop hope you will continue to write other stories as well. I believe that if you are willing to put what you write out here to be read it has a right to be here. You put something you wrote online so people could see it and that takes guts. (Guts I personally don't have yet) Flamers, I think, just get kicks from bringing other's down and by taking the story off you are doing just that, beinging yourself down. Not every person rea read and like every story but that does not mean that they can insult the writer of the story just because they didn't like it. I liked your story, while dark and rather depressing I thought you did a good job of putting feeling behind the work. Please don't let what one person says get you down. Writing is a part of yourself, never change the way you write unless you want to, you could write the best story in the world and there would still be people who would say it sucks. You can't let them get to you.
I hope you will write another story soon, I'd love to see what comes out next.
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You shouldnt take it dow but instead change bits and peices and make it a longer more thriling story, the time Jack and Will got to gether how they got together etc. More of Wills time in the vampires lair would begood to, the reaction of his parents and Elizabethhave the vampire change him instead of killing him, but maybe take it back in time to the Pirates time have him bitten then, have Jack reborn in the 20th Century and Will is looking for him etc. Keep coming with all of your stories though you have eent ent plots.
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a wonderful story... I have been in the mood for something gloomy, please dont take it do I e I enjoyed it very much. Just you really should give the Vampire a name.
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok I’m really fucking mad now!!! Stupid jackass, not even brave enough to leave an email address. This was a wonderful story with plenty of angst and it was not written to please anybody but the writer, though any good author loves to hear feedback. One most assuredly does not have the right to give so much fucking shite off to an undesng png person.
The story WAS a used story line in many fandom’s, but it was her own personal take on it and different in the fact that SHE wrote it and not anyone else. In defense of the grammar, most writers don’t usually catch it on their own, even some famous writers could not get grammar down on their own, that’s the job of the beta-reader, me!
But I’ve been terribly sick, in and out of the hospital, kind of sick, excuse me for skipping over some, no body’s perfect.ore ore publishing books, the publisher has to read, then a lot of other people read it and review it, and during this process grammar and spelling is checked and they make sure there are no plot holes to be found, I’m just one person who knows next to nothing in the way of grammar or spelling. I just have a knack for seeing these things, and if it sounds wrong when I say it out loud, I change it!
Lydia, if you take it down, it will be like giving in. Like getting kicked by a bully and shooting yourself in the head cause ase asshole doesn’t like you. Leave it up; give another chapter saying what you think about such an incorrigible, pompous, flatulent! Gather as many good reviews as you can and put it up along side it, flaunt it in this persons face about how much others enjoy it and yotyletyle of writing.
You have personal experience about how picky I am in what I enjoy, and if *I* say its good, or you have potential, then you better darn well believe it! Don’t give yourself over to the critics who hate you, or enjoy taking people down, just tell yourself your good and *that* should be all that matters.
-Edward Uwnhai Silverfang >:o
The story WAS a used story line in many fandom’s, but it was her own personal take on it and different in the fact that SHE wrote it and not anyone else. In defense of the grammar, most writers don’t usually catch it on their own, even some famous writers could not get grammar down on their own, that’s the job of the beta-reader, me!
But I’ve been terribly sick, in and out of the hospital, kind of sick, excuse me for skipping over some, no body’s perfect.ore ore publishing books, the publisher has to read, then a lot of other people read it and review it, and during this process grammar and spelling is checked and they make sure there are no plot holes to be found, I’m just one person who knows next to nothing in the way of grammar or spelling. I just have a knack for seeing these things, and if it sounds wrong when I say it out loud, I change it!
Lydia, if you take it down, it will be like giving in. Like getting kicked by a bully and shooting yourself in the head cause ase asshole doesn’t like you. Leave it up; give another chapter saying what you think about such an incorrigible, pompous, flatulent! Gather as many good reviews as you can and put it up along side it, flaunt it in this persons face about how much others enjoy it and yotyletyle of writing.
You have personal experience about how picky I am in what I enjoy, and if *I* say its good, or you have potential, then you better darn well believe it! Don’t give yourself over to the critics who hate you, or enjoy taking people down, just tell yourself your good and *that* should be all that matters.
-Edward Uwnhai Silverfang >:o