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by wordmad

schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So awesome! There isn't nearly enough Switch/Trinity in this world, and they're my favorite Matrix couple. Love how you gave Switch a bit of a past. She's my favorite and it always bugged me not to know anything about her.
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person bromo
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sad.

Nice.
person MistressBizen
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad! Not bad at all. A bit heavy on the love aspect at the end (one can be fond of a person intensely without being in love with them), but a good take on some missing thoughts we aren't vy tvy to.
person cheat
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for replying to my challenge/request


Nice story but would be better with more graphic sex. Bit too tame for me


Good characterisation


READ THIS STORY PEOPLE, IT'S GOOD!!


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person Landi
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This lov lovely story and very well written. The thoughts you've placed into Trinity's head fit that moment in the movie so well too. I hadn't thought of Switch and Trinity as a couple before but now I've read your story it's changed my whole perspective of that scene- you're right, something must have gone on between them at some point. The memories that you've written match the emotions that play between the two characters at that time so well that that really could be what goes through their minds, which is quite an accomplishment and not an easy thing to do at all. Thank you very much, I really enjoyed reading your story.