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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um.......really like the story. ^^ keep up the good work!~lon~loner
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, i`m getting better every day. Please uptdate soon. I just loved this chapter!
Why is everybody so mean to Elizabeth? I like her. Can`t you make Jack be a little bit nicer to her?
But she can`t get Will! Will belongs to Jack!
Why is everybody so mean to Elizabeth? I like her. Can`t you make Jack be a little bit nicer to her?
But she can`t get Will! Will belongs to Jack!
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want on the update list, please!!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD. This is so good! I love the alternative route you've taken - i also thought it ridiculous that Elizabeth and Will end up together - the barriers in their classes at that time would be too great. Even the disney writers seem to want Jack and WIll to be together - right at the end, Norrington says "You forget your place, Turner." and Will's reply is "It's right here, between you and Jack" Just the way he said that, and the look on his face....I'm tellin you, they're definately shagging! Ahem. Anyway, update the story soon please! And can you add me to your mailing list? Ta!
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Short but very compelling! Wonderful series here! Hope for more in the near future. I'm quite addicted to it.
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jack i hate her aswell
poor Will
poor Will
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Will
Jack save him
Jack save him
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello *winkz*
You are slowing down eh? But that is okay I don't have a lot of time at the moment and so I don't mio muo much of this story *smile*
But please how can you end a Chapter with a sentence like I want to feel it when I take you Arrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. And then the worsest not Jack is saying it to the whelp but that bastard pirate captain have you any idea what I have for pics in my mind thanks to that sentence??
But I promise that I won't kill Liz, even if it would be really funny ^-^y
After all she is running after Will *smile*
Okay and now I know (oh my or is it Know I now I don't think so but it could be) why Will is not running after the girl ^_____________^
I really like that everthing you write is so unforseen, I mean no ofence but a lot of storys sound one like the other it's a shame 'cause all a really good but one have read that kind of storylne just to often to write a nice commie ne?
So we vcan be happy that we have girls like you *hugs you* with so much fantasy ^.~
So I have to go I hope you write the next Chapy fast
By Glorry-chan @----->-------
You are slowing down eh? But that is okay I don't have a lot of time at the moment and so I don't mio muo much of this story *smile*
But please how can you end a Chapter with a sentence like I want to feel it when I take you Arrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. And then the worsest not Jack is saying it to the whelp but that bastard pirate captain have you any idea what I have for pics in my mind thanks to that sentence??
But I promise that I won't kill Liz, even if it would be really funny ^-^y
After all she is running after Will *smile*
Okay and now I know (oh my or is it Know I now I don't think so but it could be) why Will is not running after the girl ^_____________^
I really like that everthing you write is so unforseen, I mean no ofence but a lot of storys sound one like the other it's a shame 'cause all a really good but one have read that kind of storylne just to often to write a nice commie ne?
So we vcan be happy that we have girls like you *hugs you* with so much fantasy ^.~
So I have to go I hope you write the next Chapy fast
By Glorry-chan @----->-------
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hallöchen Süße ich habe dir ja einen Deutschen Commie verspochen und hier ist er *lol*
Ich finde diese geschihte wirklich genial und ich bin wirklich gespannt darauf wo uns diese Geschichte noch hin führen wird ^-^
Ich hoffe einfach mal das Jack Sparrow am Ende nicht mit Liz zusammen kommt *umknall*
Das würde mein schwaches Herz nicht verkraften Jack gehört nun mal zu Will und die beiden gehören auf die Pearl und das ist doch eigentlich das einzg wichtige.
^_^
So I think you don't understand anything but believe me is just something nice about your fanfic and your great writing style
By Glorry
Ich finde diese geschihte wirklich genial und ich bin wirklich gespannt darauf wo uns diese Geschichte noch hin führen wird ^-^
Ich hoffe einfach mal das Jack Sparrow am Ende nicht mit Liz zusammen kommt *umknall*
Das würde mein schwaches Herz nicht verkraften Jack gehört nun mal zu Will und die beiden gehören auf die Pearl und das ist doch eigentlich das einzg wichtige.
^_^
So I think you don't understand anything but believe me is just something nice about your fanfic and your great writing style
By Glorry
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do you realize that you are only writing the story AGAIN. Like, SNORE!!! I'll give ye a few tips, kill "liz", and commodor and "liz's" father, get jack and will together, and stop trying to fucking sell the original storyline for your own!!! you could go to jail for that you kno.
L.