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O_o ::is in love with story:: Why that was a most evil cliffy! (Aero: Yeah and you don't do that as well.) ::glares:: It's all your fault! ::ahem, sweatdrops:: Anyway. Please update soon... Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work! (Aero: Don't hurt Will too much!) That too. I'll be waiting for the naxt chapter!!!

At first there was a lot of the film in it and I thought 'nyeh', but then I read some more and it went all different. Stupid bloody Elizabeth, but I do like the idea of Jack dangling her overboard like he did with Will when he wouldn't co-operate. You know the bit I mean, when he was hanging from that...bit...from the ship. Damn, I need to learn more about boats.

oh no! poor will, hurry jack, hurry! you must save dear william!

woooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwww!!!! *squeals* angst, torture, and rape. funners!!! you MUST update soon, i love the slashy angst between jack and will. can you torture him? will, i mean. so then, when jack finds him, he will be broken, and jack will feel so guilty and it will create even MORE slashy-angst. *evil smile* mwahahahaha. and i'm a schitzo too! woah!!! coolies, we'll have to get together with you and write a REEEEEEEEEALLY strabge story someday. *minds form evil plot* ooooo, that gives me cool ideas. *goes off to plot* mwahahahaha!!!

~spirit

p.s. i love my evil laugh. mwahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am quite glad that more has been posted! Thank you for another entertaining read.

Why thank you, i like dogs :) Great chapter, can hardly wait for the next. *Resists the urge to get now on her knees to beg*

*hides* Poor Will! I think Barbossa is portrayed better in this than he was in the movie. He just wasn't evil enough in the movie! He could've at least hit on Lizzy or something! But not Willy-poo, no only Jack can hit on him! Unless Jacky-poo is going to save Willy-poo... In that case, it is okay! :)

Love, Kelsey

Wow. I must say, this fic is very well written. The thing I like most about it is that it doesn't linger on a part to the point of boring. The plots interesting..... and exactly how I wish the movie was....... and I love the Jack/will coupling.

Anyway, keep up the great work. I hope I have inspired you in some way and that you post the next chapter soon.

YAOI Angel

Hey a! I\! I'm too lazy to sign in to my screenname so yeh. LoL I love you for writing this! :) I can't remembe I r I reviewed this chapter already. Oh well.

Love, Kelsey

Elizabeth is such a stupid bitch. LOL I guess you knew that already though, didn't ye? :) Well, as always, update again as soon as possible.

Love, Kelsey