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for A Will to Survive

by Agarwaenloth

person Lydia NightShade
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeeee!!

I can't believe this! How could you leave it there?! I'm so nervous, our poor baby. I was always surprised nothing happened to him when he was just lying there with all those cut throats... that's how you KNOW it's Disney *snorts* I'm liking this version much better. Can't wait for the next bit. Do hurry luv, if it's not too much trouble. *innocent grin*

~lydia~


^_^
person Eci_Frog
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What?! How is Jack going to get out now? Please update soon!!!! *gets down on her knees and begs*
person lelann37
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh, i am not disappointed, sometimes the questions i come up with run away from me, but...this was great! jack has to now rescue will from the evil clutches of the cursed pirates... oh i can't wait for the next part
person katie_k
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, i just found this story and am already completely in love with it. sometimes jack and will fluff can seem really chessy but yours wasn't at all. it was just really sweet. and i like the idea of having mr brown as a good guy for once, im not sure if ive ever read another story where he is. i reckon it would be kinda cute if, after all the will angst, he helped jack to get him back on his feet.

neways, as i said, am lovin this story, cant wait for the next update. is it going to be a really long story alltogether or just an averagey one. i hope long :)

katie_k
person angelbird
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just found this story. it's great. can't wait to read more. please continue soon.
person Sarryn
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Far too cruel to cut it off there! Heartless! Ah well, this means I shall filled with anxiety to learn more. A bit o' suspense is always good for one's heart. Simply wonderful!
person Glorry
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow girl you are fast *knuffz* ookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyy nobody goes after Liz, so can I kill the whech? It would make the world a better place I'm sure about it *licks her knifes* and Jack would help me *smirk* That would be so great *jumps uo and down* may I?

Hmm normaly I'm really good with crazy guys, because I'm too crazy but hey where woul the the fun in that eh?
How many personalitys do you have? ^-^

I have a idea (is that now French or English *speaks with herself*) I write the Commis in German I love to read English but to write it? Argh I don't understand German gramma but English. But I fear than you wouldn't understand anything or?

So and now one last thing CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE pleas *Chibi eyes*

Ciao Bella By Glorry
person Lydia NightShade
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee!

Yes, I love this plot line! Much better than the original movie, and any excuse for Jack/Will slash and Will angst! Please write more soon, this is quite entertaining. This review is so lame, but I'm kinda dumb lol!

~lydia~
person lelann37
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i promise i won't give up on you! i can't wait for more! i can't wait for will and jack's trip on the intercepter...hehe, oh my imagination is goin wild.
person Glorry
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how sweet oh my you make that real good the only bad thing is that the Chapter is so short *sniff* That's not fair I want to know how the story gos on.
Ah almost forgotten I want to tell you that you're crazy *lol*
No one normal would write a thanks like you wrote it to me, by the way many thanks for the greeting I'm fealing very importent here you know?
So now we know that you're crazy and I thinks thats a real great thing ^-^ their are really not enough crazy guys like us eh, it's really a shame.

Pleas write fast I want to know why Will goes after Liz I mean he doesn't like her, but I think it will be because Will has a heart made out gold.
Oh my I really love the guy he's just so cute that nobody can resist but hey I have long accept that he belong to Jack.

See ya

Glorry *knuddelz*