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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had a fear that you might not continue. I am immeasurably relieved to find that this is not so. Lovely! I shall await more with the greatest of anticipations.
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the most wonderful story i'v ever heard and it's just the first chapter please wri writting the begining completely drew me in.
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey the idea is fantasticI think I have never read a Fanfiction where Will and Jack a madly in love from the beginning but Will still lives in Prt Royal. When can you post the next Chapter? I badly whant too know how the story goes on.
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Glorry
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Glorry
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please, please for the love of god writ the next chapter i'm dieing to no what happens next.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More! More! Please write some more!
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked that. It's a nice story so far. I like that Will and Jack have met under other circunstances. Any chance that we know how? Oh,just a little constructive criticism,I think thou cou could take some parts out,especially those where you transcribe dialogues of the movie. I mean,it's your fic and you have to do what you want to,but i think these parts equal to the movie were very long. But you write nicely and I'll wait for the next chapter anxiously.
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woah, Mr. Brown actually had some intelligiant words to say! *is amazed* I love this story, it's awesome. Update as soon as possible! Also, are you going to rewrite the whole story, or just select parts? :)
Love, Kelsey
Love, Kelsey
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm quite a bit interested in finding out your continued plans for the story. Excellent work!
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi please hurry and up date I like this verion of POTC but of course nothing will beat the first one.
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude.
I so want more, this is great :)
I'm with you, the Liz/Will thing just doesn't work in my mind... it's nice to think it does, but realistically... no, won't last.
So... does Brown know about Jack and Will? Sounded like he did.. and will you get more into how Will got to be at Port Royal if he knows Jack? and and and... um.. let's just have more of the story, eh?
please and thank yous! :D
I so want more, this is great :)
I'm with you, the Liz/Will thing just doesn't work in my mind... it's nice to think it does, but realistically... no, won't last.
So... does Brown know about Jack and Will? Sounded like he did.. and will you get more into how Will got to be at Port Royal if he knows Jack? and and and... um.. let's just have more of the story, eh?
please and thank yous! :D