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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of this plot, it really intrests me. Its hard to follow a movie's lines without making it dull, and I think your writing could stand for a little more detail to balance out the dialogue, but you're doing a great job! I'd like to see some more!
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