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for The Sail Maker

by hellborne

person LucienTelrunya
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was an unexpected end .. Very unexpected. And I don't really like that Pearl woman... I hope Jack waits for Will nontheless.
But you shocked me with those revelations, really. Jack an enuch, Will a murderer.. Really creepy. And I pity those poor characters! You really made them suffer!
But nontheless, I read all of it and it wasn't bad^^
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a very appropriate ending. Sad but good :) Still, i don't get what happened to the cat in chapter 8. What did?
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it hon, bit to graphic for my liking in the cut-of-the-goods part but apart from that i really liked this story, especially the ending where he finally finds peace:)
person Ashley
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was a wonderful story! I hate chacter death stories normally, but that was the most fitting ending I have ever read. It brought me to tears. Thank you so much for writing that :)
person he died!
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh u did kill him but that was a great fic and you're a great writer please continue writing!
person Miya Sparrow
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* I'm not mad, just disappointed *sniff* and a little upset. I mean I'm ok with killing Jack, its bound to happen *shiver* but half the time Will goes with him! *sniff* great now I need to read a nice slash fic hehe
person izzaBbehr
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was so sad, i cried! no flames for you. i loved this!
person Bunnicle
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, i love your story! it was lill sad at the end but it turned out ok! love the ending tho
person Rayne
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I kinda like that you killed him (not that I wanted Jack to die or anything, mind you... O_O). This was a very nice read. *nods* I enjoyed this fic very much! I just wanted to hug Jack the whole time! ;_; But it was really sweet how it was at the end, the very end, with the figurehead becoming the Pearl holding the sparrow. *nods* Brilliant! Two thumbs up!
person SS
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is me crying. Wow. I'll leave a coherent review tomorrow.

-SS