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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
loved the story. but dame muses. DONT EVER KILL JACK OR WILL OF EVER AGAIN. U CAN KILL ELISEBETH AND EVERY BODY ELTES OFF, BUT JUST NOT JACK OR WILL.
UNDER SLAND? GOOD
FROM ME TO U, SAVVY?
jackloveswill
(AKA CRYSTAL)
UNDER SLAND? GOOD
FROM ME TO U, SAVVY?
jackloveswill
(AKA CRYSTAL)
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hellborne! I was so happy to see your name under reviews. I hope life is treating you better, my friend.
SPOILERS BELOW:
Well what can I say? I'm very glad that he got to heal in a sense before it ended the way it did. And I love how much he and Will love each other and how tremendously tender Will is with him throughout the story. Honestly, it felt like the right ending to me, although I'm sure may will disagree. As I've said, the really trying thing for me is to see Jack hurt and treated badly - I'm afraid that the more I write him, the more in love I fall, and the the more protective I feel. But then if I didn't feel that way - for me - it would mean I wasn't doing it right!
As always, even when you take paths that I would prefer not to walk down, your writing is always thoughtful, crisp, sexy and intelligent. And for that I am gra grateful!
SPOILERS BELOW:
Well what can I say? I'm very glad that he got to heal in a sense before it ended the way it did. And I love how much he and Will love each other and how tremendously tender Will is with him throughout the story. Honestly, it felt like the right ending to me, although I'm sure may will disagree. As I've said, the really trying thing for me is to see Jack hurt and treated badly - I'm afraid that the more I write him, the more in love I fall, and the the more protective I feel. But then if I didn't feel that way - for me - it would mean I wasn't doing it right!
As always, even when you take paths that I would prefer not to walk down, your writing is always thoughtful, crisp, sexy and intelligent. And for that I am gra grateful!
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
>he began licking Jack’s member in earnest, sending Jack over the top
Are you sure that alone would work? Of course it would stirr up bad memories if Will tried to fuck Jack or even only touch "that magic spot inside", but would it really work without?
It looks as if you were rushing the story a bit towards the end. Jack not coming down from the crow's nest to take command on deck; a treasure ship surrendering after only a warning shot and nobody smells the trap? It sounds not entirely convincing to me.
>He looked down at his body.
>He seemed completely whole.
>His legs were both intact, and he was even missing the scars and other markings from his arms.
There is one other part of his body hopefully restored, and, seeing that most men value it very much and this is Jack Sparrow, I could imagine he would look there first. *g*
Don't let my nckincking get to you - the end with the ghosts finally joined and happy is lovely!
>A Most Strangely Exquisite Form
I don't think that story is better than yours, only different. Totally different storyline and aim. You shouldn't compare. Both are good in their own ways.
Are you sure that alone would work? Of course it would stirr up bad memories if Will tried to fuck Jack or even only touch "that magic spot inside", but would it really work without?
It looks as if you were rushing the story a bit towards the end. Jack not coming down from the crow's nest to take command on deck; a treasure ship surrendering after only a warning shot and nobody smells the trap? It sounds not entirely convincing to me.
>He looked down at his body.
>He seemed completely whole.
>His legs were both intact, and he was even missing the scars and other markings from his arms.
There is one other part of his body hopefully restored, and, seeing that most men value it very much and this is Jack Sparrow, I could imagine he would look there first. *g*
Don't let my nckincking get to you - the end with the ghosts finally joined and happy is lovely!
>A Most Strangely Exquisite Form
I don't think that story is better than yours, only different. Totally different storyline and aim. You shouldn't compare. Both are good in their own ways.
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!!
Honestly, I couldn't see him living or even wanting to live after losing so much more of himself. I am actually relieved that he died because I was thinking that if he had lived, he'd have been begging William to take his life for him.
Well, marvelously brilliant chatper, mate. Truly enjoyed every minute of this story.
Cheers!
Honestly, I couldn't see him living or even wanting to live after losing so much more of himself. I am actually relieved that he died because I was thinking that if he had lived, he'd have been begging William to take his life for him.
Well, marvelously brilliant chatper, mate. Truly enjoyed every minute of this story.
Cheers!
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like how you finished this story, with Jack recovering......... then dying, and then the peace. And making him blind again, was like returning to the beginning of the story. Nicely written.
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, please update it soon. Really looking forward to the final part.
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June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ICK! GROSS! LOL.. but justice is served... hahahah..
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Ooooo but great dialogue between Will and Jonas.. very chilling to hear Will say such things. I truly believe that's within his nature if he were angry enough, which apparently, he was. ;)
Good to see AFF.NET finally up and working. *does a happy dance*
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Ooooo but great dialogue between Will and Jonas.. very chilling to hear Will say such things. I truly believe that's within his nature if he were angry enough, which apparently, he was. ;)
Good to see AFF.NET finally up and working. *does a happy dance*
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please post the final chapter. Have waited for this update for ages....... and knowing that you have the final chapter finished, well... I can't wait!!!!!!!!!
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please put up the final chapter. This story is so good and i've been waiting ages for an update. Plzzzzzzz.
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww... that was beautiful and touching *eep.. pardon the pun*.. It was really wonderful how Will could see beyond Jack's physical atrocities and find only the heart of the one he loved so much and missed. I had so many questions after the last chapter... questions about like.. sex and what was possible and not possible. I suppose you've answered all of them for me. And, brilliantly done, too.
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Ok.. now, would you be so kind as to update A Pleasant Holiday? PLEEEEAAAASSSEEEEE!!! I've been anxiously awaiting any update you, but that one in particular, as well as this one, are my fav's! Honestly!! There's just not much slash I read. Just yours. It's tasteful and exquisitly written. Truly talent and not just filth.
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Keep going and feed those plot bunnies!
Ta!
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Ok.. now, would you be so kind as to update A Pleasant Holiday? PLEEEEAAAASSSEEEEE!!! I've been anxiously awaiting any update you, but that one in particular, as well as this one, are my fav's! Honestly!! There's just not much slash I read. Just yours. It's tasteful and exquisitly written. Truly talent and not just filth.
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Keep going and feed those plot bunnies!
Ta!