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for The Sail Maker

by hellborne

schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the story...but that is so horrible they made Jack chop it off himself!!!!!! How could you do that? Well anyways keep up the good work! Can't wait for another chapter to be posted.
person Jackfan2
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GASP!
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HELL NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person hammer
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my favourite story. On that last chapter I thought you were going to say that Jonas made him chop himself, in order to live. Ouch, what a thought. Update again soon, cos like I said, this is my fav story.
person hammer
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just re-read it. Jack was holding the axe wasn't he? Now you just have to update asap.
person Mahie
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this plot! You have to continue ASAP! It keeps getting better and better! I hope Jack can allow touches (at least from Will) soon. Poor thing. :(
person Ravyn
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE, PLEASE! This story is positively wonderful, I need more! :: Proceeds to sit and wait for the next update ::
person SkyFire
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep. Posting. *grin* You just have to! I love this story! ;oP If you don't I'll sic *my* rabid plotbunnies on you... and you don't want that! :oP Good job!
person Mahie
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oow sow sad...my heart clenched at that last sentence. Poor, poor Jack. :(( I hope that Will still loves him. Please do continue soon! I need more of that! This is one of your best stories so far.
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Doll, sorry to hear about the facist ferret-haters. Hope you settled somewhere friendlier. Will is so sweet in this chapter and so loving toward Jack. I'm counting on you to give him his sight back for real, even if you can't give him back whate hee he's lost. But clearly, he hasn't lost Will's love and that's certainly worth a great deal. Hmm - how is sex going to work under these circumstances? I'm very curious to see - but Goddess only k, yo, you are nothing if not inventive!

Keep up your frighteningly prolific ways -

person hammer
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!! You've updated!!!!!! I love this story. Poor Jack, will he be as clueless to Will's love for him when he can see again? Great chapter once again, please kupdaupdating.
Weather still hot in Sunny Essex (I don't usually get to say that lol) ...... apparently it was as hot as August last Friday.