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Please update this fic!!!!!!!!!!

Plz update!!!

I half hoped, half feared the raid would fail, the Spaniards would capture Jack. No matter what they would have actually done to him, it should have been hell for him and for Will also.
Now they gained lots of gold, but the Pearl is severley undercrewed and captained by a blind, depressed man whom most of the crew never knew as captain. I'd expect a mutiny as soon as the other ship is out of sight or any problem occurs.
The whole story is enthrilling and fascinating, but so very sad.
If Jack cannot bear to be touched even by Will, how shall that doctor ever work on his eyes? Would Will drug him and tie him up? Only for good of course, but scaring him to death?
Sorry I can't really feed the plot bunnies, but the plot ferrets would hunt and eat them anyway.

Jack entered the cabin and stood in the doorway. “What emergency, Captain?”

“Jack, please don’t call me that.”

“Fine. What emergency…whelp?
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Just dropped in to spy on the reviews. Have to tell you that i love this line exchange here. it nails the characters brilliantly. does. still cant get over how you are able to communicate so much with so few, but carefully selected, words. very very visual without being words. ill figure it out someday. great story. but you knew i knew that and i knew that you knew that i knew.

What happened to Jack!!!??? Please review soon! Love the story! Can't wait for the rest!! Do you have a mailing list?

Awesome so far! You've kept Jack "Jack-like" even through his injuries and less than savory past, well done. And your characterization of Will is wonderful as well. ^_^ So glad you updated, I've been looking forward to this! heh^_^V Keep up the great work!

You are the master/mistress of detail. From the spyglasses atop the guns to the battle to Jack's physical reaction to Will. You are killing me but it is brilliant. Can't wait to read more. Kisses to the ferrets.

I thought I was going to be too heartbroken to keep going on this one, but you've given me the encouragement I needed. The problem with good writing is that when its sad it works too well.

the Luz? *grins stupidly* Luz was my name in Spanish class!

I'm a dork

Please write more! *pets the plot bunnies*

I really like this story, it's sad what happened to Jack and I hope he gets to see again.

(Write more, please please please please please!)

this is very unique! and might I add very well written. Would very much like to read more!