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I love the streamlined style you use in this one. its fresh. clear. and i want to kick jack's butt for letting will think him dead all thesers. rs. hes back on the pearl at least. now to get e eye eyes open. and find out why jack cant stand to be touched. tossing crumbs to the rabid plot bunnies.

OMG!!!! you must continue this. When Jack said that no one would touch his eyes for fear of blinding him for life i was like 'hang on...he's blind if they don't' and then he said it, and i laughed.
Great premise! But he's got no leg *wails* but the bit about no one feeling pity for him as long as he put the boot on the right way LMAO!!!!
keep going, keep going, keep going!

well, here's my donation to the "Feed the Plotbunnies" fund:
If this isn't off to a great start, then...actuall don don't know, but this is starting off nicely. I've read a couple where it's will who goes off and is Changed Nearly Beyond Recognition, but i don't think i've seen it done with jack more than once before; it's a nice change. it'll be interesting to see what happened to him and the usual question of why didn't he go back to his beloved (ship, that is). hope you update soon, and your other fics too.

Continue this soon.... is kinda different from most have read...... or at least, it seems to be. Write more!!!!

Good start. Wiolloollow this one.