rate_review Reviews

This is a great story! Very well written indeed! I hope you do more like this.

Thoroughly enjoyed this. Nice to see them all a bit older but still family.

Well done.

~Ali

More please!

What a cute story! I've enjoyed it a lot. Jack is so funny XD
This fic is so IC that it's amazing. Thanks for a good time~!

Nice, fluffy piece that quite fits the holiday season. I guess since I didn't read it during the holiday season, it didn't impose full effect on me. >.< Good ideas you have; the characters were nicely IC. Although - it wouldn't exactly be batter rather than dough if Jack was able to roll it up. And wouldn't the rum kind of idfyidfy the mix? o__o; *laughs* I like to think Cap'n Sparrow is "ageless", although old age does come. ^^; Great fic.

>The first thing that Will saw was Commodore Norrington
>standing over him with a straight razor.
> "My God! Elizabeth, grab the baby and get out of here!
>He's not taking us! Jack!"
*rotfl*
The whole thing is as sweet as rum cookies. (If only the rum would stay in the blasted things during baking.)

All I can say is "I wish I had a pencil thin mustache, so I could solve some mysteries too." I'm sure you have no idea where that's from but if you do AWESOME!
It's a quote from a Jummy Buffet song that I love. I started singing it after you described Will's Mustache. Thanks for thery! ry! Loved it!

-HisBeautiful- AKA: Chelsey

You have a great imagination, but I don't like the thought of Jack being ... (sob) OLD!