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We didn't read this story because we like f/f only, unless there masturbation female and men watch (though we prefer f/f voeyuerism) well anyway, we wish the best to Hellborne and wish her well on her journey to the land of Eternal Peace (Paradise) and to wish that her fnial Christmas and Boxing Day was a happy one, enjoying happy final hours with loved ones and friends.
Yours Sincerely,
Anna and Heather

OK, I'll go over to fanfiction.net and try to find the end of this story. Just found it or I would have reviewed sooner. Seriously good plot bunny here and glad you followed it up for our pleasure.

WOW! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

Ferrets and katanas and secret identities. Very cool. Love what you did with Jack's history, and Norrington's future.

You've stepped well out of canon, letting a man who owns half Jamaica take ten years to recover his Pearl. But that plot hole is like bad bits of pavement on the scenic route: no challenge to ignore, while the sights are so engaging. And your daring to explain the presence of Pintel and Ragetti goes a long way to make up for the other one. If I could have a dish or two from Rags' galley, all would be square.

I like your characterizations. You plot and pace action and revelation well. I even like the critters. In sum, I hope your plot ferrets remain strong, sleek, and above all prolific!

WOW...love the sequel as much as the first story. Please update and finish the ending.......and could there be another in the series after this???? Your fans await with baited breath. Will definitely "keep a weather eye" out for future chapters. Well done.
5 stars.......

A most excellent story. I liked the teeth part. I had been thinking CJS covered "real" teeth with gold. But I can see where a pirate-etc. would need some falsies! I love epilogues also, it's a "where are they now" thing! Thanks bunches!!!
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I enjoyed this story. The plot line was well done, and the characters nicely written. I liked the 'adjustments' that you made to the characters, and the developing of their back grounds. I wish I could see how the Christmas Party turned out. . . Oh well. Keep up the good work.

>The ridges from his slave’s brand were smooth to the touch and
had faded a bit through the years, but it was still there.
Ah, so Jack was a slave once. That explains a lot.
But such a sad end - caged sparrow. *sob*
Nonetheless, I feed the plotbunnies - to the plotferrets. Go for them, Kali, Satan!

Love it! All hail to the mighty plot ferrets!